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Re: Big Surprises (Mini-GTS/Gentle/18+)
Damn fine start! I really enjoy where this is going. Well told, and interesting characters. Also... believable. Obviously its *not* really believable, but you still make me 'believe' it. Thanks
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Now the fun begins.
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Interesting questions come to mind, such as will the medicine become more effective as she gets taller because of saturation., or less effective because it needs a larger dosage.
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Pseudoclever,
Not a bad first three chapters, not bad at all. Subscribed to this thread as I am now eagerly anticipating the next installment:) VolfsBayne |
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Colour me very impressed by your writing ability.
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Re: Big Surprises (Mini-GTS/Gentle/18+)
Chapter Four
I picked up a strawberry from the bowl and covered it in a generous amount of chocolate. She opened her mouth expectantly, and I reached out to feed it to her, letting the edges of the fruit gently brush the edges of her lips. Kristen closed her eyes as she bit down, moaning softly. Once again I watched as she swelled bigger, gaining another inch in height. Her pert little breasts were beginning to strain against the confining fabric of her shirt. ?Wow Justin, you don't know how good this feels,? she whispered as I moved to dip another strawberry in the bowl. ?Tell me about it, then,? I replied, dangling it above her. Despite being a little shell-shocked by the sudden and fantastical revelation of the existence of magic, I would never miss an opportunity to hear my girl talk dirty. ?Describe the way this makes you feel.? ?I don't know if I should,? she said coyly, nibbling on the fruit. ?It might make me get a little carried away. And you KNOW what chocolate does to me.? ?You keep saying that, but I have temporarily forgotten. Please tell me, what does it do? In detail.? She licked at the side of the strawberry, taking some of the dense brown syrup into her mouth. ?It makes me horny, baby. So horny I just don't know what to DO with myself.? As she said this I could see her start to grow again. The hemline of her skirt rose, revealing more of her long, sculpted legs. Her breasts were definitely getting bigger as well. Kristen had always been right on the line between an A cup and a B, but now it looked as though she were rapidly approaching a small C. ?What about all of this?? I asked, eyeing her up and down as I reached for another strawberry. ?Tell me how it feels to grow.? ?It's...I don't even know...how to describe it,? she said in between bites. ?I feel hot, like there's this wonderful, bubbling liquid spreading through every part of my body, filling me up. Every time it comes it's a little bit stronger, and it makes me feel so good.? I lovingly placed another strawberry on the tip of her tongue. By now she was at least five foot seven, and with each bite her body was still spurting larger. Watching her clothes slowly grow tighter, her head rising higher, her tits swelling outward...it was absolutely breathtaking. And the idea that she was still growing, that soon she might be as tall as I was, or even taller.... I offered her another strawberry, and this time she snatched it from my hand and gulped it down without even bothering to chew. Before I knew what was happening she placed her hands on my shoulders and shoved me hard. I stumbled back, arms flailing, and landed in the same chair that I'd just sat, what now seemed like eons ago, eating a pleasant dinner with my perfectly normal girlfriend. And then she was on top of me, wrapping her legs around my waist and kissing me savagely. Her lips found my checks, my neck, my ears. She ran the tips of her fingers through my hair, causing me to let out a little sigh of contentment. I put my hand on the back of her head and drew her toward me, planting my lips firmly on hers. Our kiss felt as though it were charged with an impossible amount of potential energy. The delightful weight of her body as she straddled my lap, the caress of her warm skin against mine, and the ever-present sensation of her expanding against me. We continued to make out for awhile, just enjoying being so close together. Gradually the intensity of our actions waned, until eventually we just sat, holding each other. I could feel her heart pounding against my chest, could smell the familiar aroma of her hair. This is something that many long-term relationships lack ? being able to cuddle, or wrestle, or just kiss without any real purpose or goal. It's so easy, once you know all your partner's ?cheat codes,? to just go for the quick orgasm every time. A, B, up, down, start, select, and BOOM, you can roll over and go to sleep. Not so with my girl. We've never lost the ability to just...be. I was so comfortable holding her that it took me quite awhile to notice that something was amiss. ?Kristen...not that I'm complaining,? I said. ?But why are you still growing? You stopped eating at least ten minutes ago.? ?I thought that would be obvious,? she whispered into my ear, giving me a little squeeze. ?It wasn't the strawberries that were making it happen. Any positive energy will do. And right now you're giving me a LOT of it.? As she spoke her hot breath tickled me, sending shivers down my spine. By and by I felt her growth slow, and finally come to a stop. Kristen lifted herself off me and rose to her full height. I followed her with my eyes, interested to see just how large she had become. I was not disappointed. She has always been attractive. I don't know how many times I've told her that, with a little bit of effort, she could easily be a ten. But now, I believed she had transcended the numbering system all together. Her outfit looked almost comically small on her now. Her skirt was far shorter and much tighter than its designers had intended, showing off the luscious curves of her hips. Her breasts were magnificent, perhaps small D-cups now, and they filled her top to overflowing. She had never had much cleavage to speak of before, but now several inches could be seen pushing through the neckline of her overstressed shirt. Perhaps it was just my imagination, but her entire body seemed a bit more muscular. Several inches of her stomach were visible, and I hadn't remembered her abs being quite so well-defined. Her arms and legs looked stronger too. Yet despite all the muscle, she still managed to look feminine. Every inch of her absolutely dripped sexuality. And in fact, she had quite a few more inches to work with. A rough estimate put her at five foot ten, by far the tallest girl I've ever been with. I was elated, but also somewhat disappointed on another, deeper level. True, she was much bigger now. But she was still shorter than me. I tried to push this thought out of my head ? there was no reason to be anything other than thrilled with what had happened. ?Told you it would work,? Kristen said, smirking at me condescendingly. She bent over, resting her hands on her knees, giving me the best possible look at her cleavage. ?I...uhh...guess I was mistaken,? I said, unable to take my eyes off her. ?I guess this is as big as I'm going to get from that stuff,? she said, poking the ceramic jar where it lay on the countertop. ?Oh well, I'm pretty happy with the way things turned out.? She stooped over to kiss me again, then stopped abruptly. She sniffed the air around my head, scowling distastefully. ?Wow, I didn't notice before, but you smell like bad pizza. I think we need to take a shower.? Without waiting for me to respond, she turned and walked toward the bathroom, giving me a good look at her heart-shaped behind. I moved to followed her, but she held up her hand. ?You know what? I'm actually kind of thirsty all of a sudden. Be a dear and bring me one of my cans of iced tea out of the fridge?? She walked out of sight around the corner, and I watched her go, dumbfounded. A second later her shirt landed on the floor at my feet. Her skirt soon joined it. ?I'd hurry if I were you.? I bolted into the kitchen. It took me about two seconds to find her beverage of choice, and I turned to dash up to the bathroom. I stopped short however, as I spied the little brown jar still sitting on the counter. For awhile I just stared at it, almost able to hear the gears turning in my head. Kristen had said her dose had been spent. She was still shorter than me. Before my conscience could interfere, I popped the top of her beverage and poured several drops of the elixir inside. -----------------End Act 1----------------------- Next Update Sunday afternoon. |
Re: Big Surprises (Mini-GTS/Gentle/18+)
Can't.....wait...till...sunday...must....have....m ore...now!!!!
Honestly though, your story is absolutly great so far, and I absolutly love the way it appears to be heading ;) |
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That's hot. Your writing continues to be top-shelf, and you're certainly good at making things sound very sexy.
Dude is clearly not thinking straight though--she's gonna be a lot bigger than him if she drinks that whole can, and she might be mad at him for what he's done...bad situation. Of course he might feel that it's worth it. :) |
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One drop makes her 6" :D
Ten drops makes her 15? :p :) |
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2. I never said 10, I said "several." 3. Math is forbidden. ;) |
Re: Big Surprises (Mini-GTS/Gentle/18+)
oh boy, this is going to get even better than it already is, and it looks as if its going to happen quickly :D can't wait!!
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