That was very nice! At least you were motivated enough to animate the girl. It would have been not to good if you had animated water, but nothin else!

what you should do is make her get even bigger, or do another animation of her in a different position

when time is available and when i feel like it XD ill do more [dont hold your breath im lazy]

Sorry it took me so long to respond, but the problem I have with it that the face looks a tad fish-like to me.

I love it! Also making me de-lurk because of this. Very nice. The fluidness in the animation is great, along with just the little details of how smoothly everything moves. That and in itself is an awesome image. :3 I just wish I could get a still of that last image. xD

Shadow: Ever heard of CONSTRUCTIVE criticism? Not one nice thing about any person's work has ever been said by you. Maybe try pointing out the positive aspects of a work instead of attacking the little discrepancies. Why do you think you got banned in the first place?

Yeesh, even the lurkers are attacking me...


Anyways, I said earlier on the thread that I didn't like it, and he asked why.
I was simply answering the reasons as to why I didn't like it.
That is not deconstructive criticism, I was stating that it looked similar to fish-lips.




Anyways, he has enough people kissing up to him, one person stating their opinion wouldn't do much to hurt his artistic attitude.

i know your a little crude but you are entitled to your opinion ,no offence taken

the lips are extra puff and pouty so i guess thats what makes it fish like

but to be hones i was expecting some other part of the face to be comented on XD

thanks for the info

Ummm isn't THAT constructive criticism?

Usually constructive criticism, while it does have the aspect of pointing out issues, has a CONSTRUCTIVE aspect, where maybe you give a bit of help, or a way to remedy the problem, rather than just pointing it out.

So, say you do have a problem with the look of the lips, you'd want to say something about how maybe if you thinned out the lower lip a bit, or flattened them into the face a little more, etc., rather than just stating the issue.

Hey it can be to the point and direct. The artist has two options:

1. Ask whats the problem is
2. Cry like a little girl, throw a tantrum and declare that their art is flawless and swear badly at the critic.

can i change from option one to option two XD

Too late for that little mister, you've made your choice, and your going to stay with it...