seems like it's the time for an indiana jones boulder race ^^

Nice series love the new Muscle bunny rabbit thing ^^ Do you take commisions!

That last page was one of those "buh wha guh?" moments to me. ...interesting idea you had there, Skiff.

Next page... Ran out of time for the page after. I got the storyboard done though. Lot of action on the next page, should keep me busy.

I don't know about commissions. BIG maybe. I'd like to just continue on the comic.

(yah yah. I know I drew her hand weard...)

Looking good, Skiff.

Quite nice. I don't think it's appreciated enough when the sound effects match the comic, but you've done a good job with location and word choice for comedic effect (liked the 'e' added to boing, gives it that extra springy feel in my head for some reason =P)

Looks good- my only question is why didn't she land on her feet? If you meant for it to look like she was going on all fours, you need to raise her up a bit. I mean, if she's going after someone, it doesn't make a whole lot of sense to lay flat like that, and if she's agile enough to jump off of walls and such like that, there's no reason she'd land flat unless she wanted to...

Good page, though. As always, can't wait to see more.

Hey Proph, Warlock- you guys have BEA accounts, right? You should maybe put a link up in the Plume/Palette about this comic- certainly qualifies for BE, if not several other things!

Hmm, maybe the Plume but not the General Forum - lest this place be flooded with a thousand doddering idiots. ;)

Heh, exactly. Your choice of adjectives is certainly more charitable than what mine would have been regarding the general temperment and aptitude of the denizens of the general forums, but the point still stands as exceedingly correct.

Still, though, Denny got a favorable response from his be animation (Heck, if a stalwart like G_I_John swipes it, it's got to be good) and I think skiff could benefit from what support and criticism the BEA would have to offer...

Ha, well generally best not to be too contemptuous of forums you frequent. Especially as I'm the editor of the BE story club :P

I swear you guys will get my money as soon as Dream Girl finishes, but I keep hearing from people who were signed up during chapter 1/2 and have paid out something close to a hundred bucks waiting for the thing to finish...

Aren't we on chapter 3?

As to when that project will be finished - all I can say is, finished when it's finished. Sadly not everyone can be as productive as Skiff et al here.