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Re: Attribute Theft/Transfer

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Originally Posted by Skylion (Post 801305)

Just discovered this gem:

http://www.giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=6453

I don't much like size transfer and giantess type stories. But the writing in this was amazingly well done, my favorite paragraph in the entire thing.

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Despite being trapped in some sort of suspended animation I resisted the urge to panic. Though, honestly, it may have been that the thing preventing me from breathing also prevented me from losing my mind. Given my inability to move, speak, breathe, hear, or even feel- panic seemed like a perfectly good option. Instead I did what all objects on shelves do: nothing, I certainly didn’t reflect on how I’d ended up here. That was a problem for Future Mike; a guy undaunted by living in a nightmare and able to perform incredible feats such as breathing air. Though oxygen, apparently, was not a necessary ingredient for my current state of existence.

I loved that paragraph and I loved this style of writing, unfortunately though, I didn't like the end. It just felt.. wrong. Nothing was accomplished, the old Heather seemed like it would appear through the cracks, then disappear again. I get the author wanted to let that bit of Heather shine through, but it gave a hope that just never went anywhere.

He tried his best to wrap things up in the final chapter, unfortunately, it left me thinking. The old Heather, from all that time ago, was lost forever and that our protagonist was going to suffer or learn to love it. I'd have loved to have seen a couple of more chapters, him working with the other character in the story that knows the secret. Devising a way to balance the scale so to speak, to break the spell that Heather had been trapped in, when she had only hoped to help her friend. The entire story is a tragedy when taken in with that context.

Not only that, it's a tragedy without a proper ending. The author says something about an old cartoon, where Wiley finally caught the Roadrunner and held up a sign that said "now what". It's actually a rather famous scene in cartoon history. Because a child wouldn't know what came next, so neither did Wiley. That's not really what happens here though. The author tries to say the protagonist longed for Heather his entire life, but when he had her, he didn't know what to do next. That's not at all what happens in this story though truth be told. Heather is a maniacal super worldly being trapped by dark magic to consume, the more she consumes, the more darkness inside of her grows in strength. The truly tragic part, she didn't want this, she didn't want any of it.

She even mentions at a certain point near the end, she didn't want this, but it's almost like she has two different personalities. Which in truth, she probably does. The one that hungers and the innocent child that doesn't want to hurt anyone.

I hope this author is here somewhere, I'd love to see him follow this up with a proper ending. Ending Heather's suffering in some way or form.

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Originally Posted by godleydemon (Post 801323)

I don't much like size transfer and giantess type stories. But the writing in this was amazingly well done, my favorite paragraph in the entire thing.

I loved that paragraph and I loved this style of writing, unfortunately though, I didn't like the end. It just felt.. wrong. Nothing was accomplished, the old Heather seemed like it would appear through the cracks, then disappear again. I get the author wanted to let that bit of Heather shine through, but it gave a hope that just never went anywhere.

He tried his best to wrap things up in the final chapter, unfortunately, it left me thinking. The old Heather, from all that time ago, was lost forever and that our protagonist was going to suffer or learn to love it. I'd have loved to have seen a couple of more chapters, him working with the other character in the story that knows the secret. Devising a way to balance the scale so to speak, to break the spell that Heather had been trapped in, when she had only hoped to help her friend. The entire story is a tragedy when taken in with that context.

Not only that, it's a tragedy without a proper ending. The author says something about an old cartoon, where Wiley finally caught the Roadrunner and held up a sign that said "now what". It's actually a rather famous scene in cartoon history. Because a child wouldn't know what came next, so neither did Wiley. That's not really what happens here though. The author tries to say the protagonist longed for Heather his entire life, but when he had her, he didn't know what to do next. That's not at all what happens in this story though truth be told. Heather is a maniacal super worldly being trapped by dark magic to consume, the more she consumes, the more darkness inside of her grows in strength. The truly tragic part, she didn't want this, she didn't want any of it.

She even mentions at a certain point near the end, she didn't want this, but it's almost like she has two different personalities. Which in truth, she probably does. The one that hungers and the innocent child that doesn't want to hurt anyone.

I hope this author is here somewhere, I'd love to see him follow this up with a proper ending. Ending Heather's suffering in some way or form.

I definitely agree, it just doesn't feel concluded at all. Heather either needed to double then an actually steal the size from the rest of sorority or figure out away to make amends. It definitely feels unfinished, and it really need a culmination to the tragedy. Hopefully, it will inspire someone to write a story in a similar vein. I think it would be interesting if she drained other attributes as well, explicitly like some of the other popular goddess ascension stories.

This was really fun and interesting because it seems as it was written as a much as psychological horror as much as tragedy. That would be a really interesting approach that I've rarely seen taken in the genre. Sure, some people may swap so many attributes that they can't return to their normal lives, but rarely does the character go on as quite a terrifying power trip as Heather.

Really hope this story inspires someone. :)

Re: Attribute Theft/Transfer

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Originally Posted by Skylion (Post 801305)

Just discovered this gem:

http://www.giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=6453

This reminds me of a story I read years ago. From what I remember, it also had a school setting with an overdeveloped rich girl used to getting whatever she wants and an unremarkable guy who finds her hot but cannot stand her character. He thinks he has no chance with her, but draws her attention when he stands up to her at an icecream or a coffee shop while she was bullying a less fortune girl. She decides (for him) that he’d be taking her out on a date, so he works his ass off and uses up all his savings to take her to this very expensive restaurant (she is from a rich family, so she wouldn’t stand for any less). There, she reveals her powers to him by stealing the breast size from another patron. The other woman is left completely flat, but she only grows a bit in exchange because most of the size is lost to the spell.

She keeps pulling him arond, and at some point comes up with this plan of stealing the future development of all the students (so it wouldn’t draw as much attention as shrinking people?) to grow huge. Later chapters reveal her past and the nature of her powers, and build a pretty captivating magical universe. I remember something about a big magical familiy (like in this story), a powerful and perhaps evil half-sister, and people looking to get her. At some point, she gets attacked by a witch who stands no chance against her. She drains the witch’s size to literally grow out of her shoes. The witch has to pledge her allegiance to save her skin.

I remember there being 12 chapters or so which compromised the first volume. The volume ends witha huge cliffhanger about going to a different dimension to save someone. There wasn’t a second volume at the time which was disappointing.

Most of the details are quite fuzzy, and I might be inventing scenes or borrowing from other stories, but the mystery and magicical universe developed was really good. At some point, I stopped reading for attribute theft and stayed for the plot. I don’t know if this enough detail, but does any of this ring any bells?

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Originally Posted by Skylion (Post 801305)

Just discovered this gem:

http://www.giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=6453

Thats not a gem stop

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Originally Posted by roronoazorosan (Post 803557)

Most of the details are quite fuzzy, and I might be inventing scenes or borrowing from other stories, but the mystery and magicical universe developed was really good. At some point, I stopped reading for attribute theft and stayed for the plot. I don’t know if this enough detail, but does any of this ring any bells?

That's the investigation of Caley pretice by gtortoise

http://mg-sg.pbworks.com/w/page/5824...by%20GTortoiSe

If I remember correctly, as the relationship in the story got more 'intimate' people were starting to get uncomfortable with the fact that they both 15-16.

Gtortoise last I checked had written a couple chapters of a part 2 which starts with a time skip, so that they're now both 18.

Can't remember the title, but search for gtortoise on giantesscity and you should find it.

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Originally Posted by LezloShig (Post 803849)

That’s the one, thanks! I need to reread this to see if it’s as good as I made it out to be...

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So I managed to find the second book, the sequel to "The investigation of Caley Prentice" called "The Coronation of Lillian Prentice". Unfortunately, I don't think I found the whole thing. It's only about a little passed half way through. I found it on giantesscity.com boards, where it looks like he was posting this, but it doesn't look like he ever finished it there. Last post to the story was Jun 15, 2014, so I don't think it was ever finished. But I'll look around a little more this evening to see if I can track down a few more chapters. He seems to post in alot of places for some reason.

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Originally Posted by LezloShig (Post 803849)

If I remember correctly, as the relationship in the story got more 'intimate' people were starting to get uncomfortable with the fact that they both 15-16.

Gtortoise last I checked had written a couple chapters of a part 2 which starts with a time skip, so that they're now both 18.

Can't remember the title, but search for gtortoise on giantesscity and you should find it.

Yes, you are correct, they fast forwarded the story through a 4 year time skip. Explained by Caley putting a protection on Andy that sealed him away for 4 years. This picks up, when he's 18 yrs old.

Also, the story actually isn't to bad, I wouldn't consider it fetish material really. I guess it does depend on your tastes, but it has an interesting kind of lore to it.

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Just in case... https://www.patreon.com/gtortoise

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