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WOW! Great finish. can't wait to read more from you.

Re: Big Surprises (Mini-GTS/Gentle/18+)
 

Well to tell you the truth you don't leave us with much to nitpick about. And I don't feel like making an ass out of myself for posting about minor spelling mistakes, which is the only flaw I seem to have found.

Anyways thank you so much for taking your time to write this awesome story. In the short amount of time you have been posting you've improved, which is amazing seeing how your first story was almost perfect. You have to love your use of the process and your writing style( Seriously Stephen King better watch out if you decide to take up writing horror :)). Seriously your ability to write graphic sexual acts is enough to make a man jealous :D

Thank you again for all your hard work and I hope to see your next story up soon.

Re: Big Surprises (Mini-GTS/Gentle/18+)
 

A great finish to a great story. Thank you for sharing this with us.

Re: Big Surprises (Mini-GTS/Gentle/18+)
 

"De la cura, viene el dinero."

You gotta watch out for those sneaky shamans. :)

Very nice. You've got quite a skill for, umm...shall we say vividly descriptive detail.

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Honestly, you should think about becoming a professional writer! Unless your current job is more profitable of course ;)
I simply do not find a single thing that I could criticise you about.

This story has become one of my (if not THE) most favourite process related stories ever.

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:D I agree completely Twilight Wolf.