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Thanks! Glad you liked it. :D

Another little one I was thinking of would be : a young woman is in her tiny dormroom with her dwarf bunny for only company. As she get out of the shower, a sort of rip in the fabric of reality seem to occur in front of her, centered on her pet. Under her very own eyes, it seem to bulge and grow in a freaky manner, making her nearly faint. Meanwhile, the dwarf rabbit eventually finish her transformation into a naked bewildered woman. Feeling her mind expand, she try out a few words, before seeing her master who stumbled down on the floor, rushing to help her lie on her bed, her towel long since lost. While the young woman slowly regain her composure, the former pet notice the open drawer, and full of curiosity try some dress. Right then, a sort of little floating figure pop in the room, saying he's sorry about the accidental reality rip. Seem like there was a unautorized animal to human transformation. Will do the repair asap! Glancing at the dressed woman standing near a naked dizzy one, he joyfully wave his hands at the latter as he claim it won't take long. Before the college girl can fully understand what's going on and voice her protest, she's no longer able to speak, as she undergo a reverse version of the freakish transformation. The floating little man smile as he say goodbye and pop out of existence, leaving behind the puzzled former pet and a very distressed dwarf rabbit.

What do you think of this one? :P

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I'm pretty sure I've written TFs that didn't involve arousal. 'Latet Shift' for example didn't involve the woman becoming aroused by the transformation, it just had a very long build up with stripping and sweating before a slow painful change. Though, probably every story since then has had a mixture of pain and pleasure.

I'm not sure about the Japanese werewolf story, I'm not familiar with the culture, the names of traditional Japanese clothing items etc. I just watch anime sometimes, and I don't feel I could get the vibe right any better than I could with the character TF idea, so may have to pass on that one. The alternate version of 'The Locker Room' I have started on, it picks up from the end of the original tease version and transitions straight to Claire's dorm room that night.

It reminds me I haven't yet written a rabbit TF, but the reality bending alien thing is a little outside my wheelhouse I think. I'm more a curse, magic, virus trigger kinda person. Also I tend not to write animal to human, I usually skip the revert scenes at the end of my own stories too, instead either implying they changed back or that they will, or just keeping it permanent because I don't care to write an animal becoming human.

I will try to write a rabbit TF at some point though. Probably something along the lines of a cursed rabbit's foot that someone tries to use like a monkey's paw to make wishes, only to find it's even worse at granting wishes than the infamous paw ever was.

But thank you for the suggestion anyway.

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You're very welcome. ;) I look forward seeing that rabbit TF paw idea.

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Yes, I’m pretty sure that Late Shift is the only one that has 100% pain and no pleasure/arousal and even then has some… explicit description with her… fluid. So alright then, even when you rejected the Japanese part of the werewolf which I understand. I guess my second request is a simple “Painful First Transformation” in addition to the Alternate Version of the Locker Room, that’s it.

Thank you for at least reading my requests though.

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Pretty sure the fluid in question was just sweat soaking her panties, but yeah I got really erotic with the details of her stripping in the elevator before she transformed.

Anywho, I will aim to write a straight up painful werewolf TF as well, sometime after the Locker Room alternate version, which will be all kinds of pleasure-based and fluid mentioning I assure you.

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Okay, i guess i was mistaken with that part then, but i'm okay with some slow stripping. And thank you, cam't wait to see both.

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Wow. That's a surprisingly quick turnup.

Somehow, i felt that even without the Werewolf thing, i suspected that Claire has some crush on Amy. Though i'm actually surprised that the change is from Amy's persoective and not Claire's. But it's actually welcome since you didn't do a lot of... 'Third-person' perspective on someone's change. i only remembered a couple from Climate Change.

Thank you for making this by the way, good luck in your other ones.
By the way, why your TF always has their lower body goes to the floor and raised the back part at some point? That recurring detail bothered me a bit.

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Eh? That pose bothers you?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5sc_nQiuDN0

I've just always liked the top down and bottom up pose, it emphasizes the smexy that is a lady on all fours. To me anyway.

Some examples of what I was going for in picture form.

https://www.deviantart.com/mvanceart...cess-878866106
https://www.deviantart.com/laviwasta...rl-1-810348437
https://www.deviantart.com/phillip-t...sion-479357838
https://www.deviantart.com/zinoodle/...OOOO-795602523

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Eh... It's actually more like why did you put that pose every single time, also that video has none of that actual pose in it

And alright then, thank you for explaining why did i see that pose every time.

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I don't know if you are willing to do some of these but maybe you can revisit an old idea you had thought of like the one where a woman would change into a rat if she missed her dosage of a drug since she took another one thad made her turn into one but changes to human form only once and missing a dose means becoming a rat forever.