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for those of you know familiar, addventures are stories that each person who reads it can chose to write the next part of, expanding the story. it has multiple options for every part, which can lead to multiple plots going on.
check out wikipedia or something for a more detailed explanation. anyway, this paticular addventure is a metroid one, involving a planet that ridley and the space pirates (I just copyrighted that name for my band.) to be a fake chozo planet, filled with traps, monsters and fake "upgrades" that sometimes end in BE, Bimbofication, mind alteration and multiple fetishes. there are two main plots running, although there are many smaller, less expanded subplots in these as well. it starts with samus picking up an upgrade that turns her power suit into a whoreish parody of her regular suit, lowering her power and exposing, ahem, private parts. it then branches off into the two main plots, the first involving samus's mind slowly being altered to accept her new suit, and a parasite that ends up in her womb changing her body to have useless traits of chozos, drastically weakening her and physically altering her body. the other has samus collecting slutty weapons that utilize her breasts and other parts, while changing her mind slowly into a slutty bimbo, resulting in a bimbo samus, and the regular samus being planted as a powerless second concious that can't control her body.

I have contributed to this, and many, many others have too. this is part request, to go check it out and expand on it. to do so would be to honor the lives that the men and woman lost to create this story. wait, cut out the dying part. the link to the start is here, http://iiichan.net/stuff/be/dodge/?episode=564135
and the most recent update, by me, is here. http://iiichan.net/stuff/be/dodge/?episode=620178
to understand most of it, you will need to start from the beginning, and work your way up to the end of both parts. If you are to look at this, I strongly reccomend opening multiple tabs and windows to show different plots, and so you don't have to spend long amounts of time trawling back to where you chose a different plot.
feel free to add on anything, provide different options, and expand on this story. I only ask that you post whatever you have made with a link to this thread. oh, and options that have been created, have stars next to them, you will go to a blank page with the ones that don't. that page gives you the choise to write a new part from there. gentlemen, I bid you goodnight.

by the way, looong post. I would like someone to move this thread if it is in the wrong place. this is a definate request. if you expand on something, I would be extremely grateful if you expanded on my part, shown up there. it is just a request, but it would make me very happy. and me not happy is a very bad thing. again, please move if this is in the wrong place.

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That last addition could really use paragraphs.

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sorry.

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has anyone started reading, and has anyone contributed. remember to add a link to the page on this thread.

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I've actually read through all of it, and I've been considering adding to it a bit, probably to that area where Samus' missile launcher is converted to a milk launcher.

I'm not overly fond of mental bimboization, especially with established, strong characters, so I'll probably hijack the 'Something Else' option at some point to have Samus snap out of it to some extent. If nothing else, her constantly referring to her blaster as 'icky' has been really irking me.

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Looked through it again, seems an AR section was added.

http://iiichan.net/stuff/be/dodge/?episode=644148

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I just added an episode. It probably won't show up for an hour though.

http://www.bearchive.com/~addventure...04/704719.html

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I know, there are definately some other subplots that would have definately gone better. bimbozation just didn't work for that, but the good folks decided thats what they wanted to do. I'll help sabotage it, you just post a link to what you made, and I'll help it on its way.

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I continued a bit from the spider impregnating her, added some TF oprions at the end. ;)

http://iiichan.net/stuff/be/dodge/?episode=699832

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great! The other impregnating bit is in the storyline where she get's a parasite inside her, that biologically changes her.

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Hey, neat, people are using my proxy page for the addventure!

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you host this version of it? awesome!

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Perhaps I'll add to this later.

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I've finally gotten around to adding to this thing. My contributions begin at this point. Everything I plan to write for this thing will stem from this point. I know there's not really any process in that page specifically, but I felt that really needed to be done.

I intend to add several more sections to this little corner of the story, but if anyone else wants to add to it, that's great. :D

Here's what I have so far:

Samus shakes off the mental alterations and gets back to her usual bounty hunter self(if you don't like it, bite me).
* Samus continues on in the sex-based weapon-filled suit and comes across some enemies(lactation)
** Samus' breasts begin spraying milk constantly and uncontrollably(minor BE, lactation... duh).
*** Samus masturbates as her breasts continue spraying milk(lactation, I mean c'mon, you should expect that from me by now).
**** Samus acquires the Morph Ball(dunno, some kinda contortion, I guess?)
***** Samus acquires the Morph Ball Bomb(Butt, Hip Expansion)
** Samus' breasts engorge with large amounts of milk, making them grow to massive size(extreme BE, minor lactation).
*** Samus uses her Milk Launchers to shrink her breasts back down, and the extended use convinces the Power suit that 'additional' Milk Launchers need to be added(extreme lactation, multiple breasts).
**** Samus acquires the Morph Ball upgrade(don't worry, it's not a carbon copy of the above)
***** Samus comes to a room with a slime pit in it. She tries to wade through it, but it seeps into her skin and bloats her boobs and butt(breast/butt expansion)

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Awesome job. ;)

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I've made some new ones, and they're... ever changing, to say the least. since the start of this thread, my entries have samus becoming pregnant twice, moving to a new trick planet, being AR'd, her hair changing colour, and a chozo consious manipulating events.
http://iiichan.net/stuff/be/dodge/?episode=620178
http://iiichan.net/stuff/be/dodge/?episode=704651
http://iiichan.net/stuff/be/dodge/?episode=704790
http://iiichan.net/stuff/be/dodge/?episode=704865
http://iiichan.net/stuff/be/dodge/?episode=704906
http://iiichan.net/stuff/be/dodge/?episode=705043
http://iiichan.net/stuff/be/dodge/?episode=706878
http://iiichan.net/stuff/be/dodge/?episode=706892
http://iiichan.net/stuff/be/dodge/?episode=706929
http://iiichan.net/stuff/be/dodge/?episode=707057
http://iiichan.net/stuff/be/dodge/?episode=707291
http://iiichan.net/stuff/be/dodge/?episode=707317
http://iiichan.net/stuff/be/dodge/?episode=707527

by the way, the last one on this list states that the changes made to samus will not be bimbozation, feminine assets, eg breasts hips face, cannot happen. as always, I would like to have someone expand on these. if pyrowildcat reads this, I support his thread, will probably add to it later, and would appreciate him looking at mine. Edit: It just means no major changes. you want her to have enough hair to make a hammock thats cool. tattoo allover her body? fine. just no really big stuff. It means that you have to go for different changes rather than the regular changes like BE.

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...uh, okay, I hate to say this, but I really have to be frank here. I don't approve of a single thing about this storyline. What irked me about the bimboization was that it completely derailed Samus' entire character. You have just as utterly destroyed Samus Aran, you just went to the opposite extreme, which I would almost say is even worse, since with all traces of femininity erased entirely, what the hell is the point of this story? And then on top of everything, you have the gall to outright forbid anything that would actually fix what you've done.

*sigh*

But I digress. You have a, well a storyline anyway, just work on grammar and such to make it look a little more presentable. I won't be touching it myself, though.

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I always imagined Samus Aran as rather tomboyish anyway. I mean she is a bounty hunter.

I agree with you on the bimboization though, but for different reasons. I LIKE bimboization, but not identity death. Let her have some glimmer of her original self so she knows what she's lost. Otherwise it might as well be a different character. (An idea I'll never pursue because no one else would be interested: The realistic Samus from Prime 1 TFed into the anime style zero suit Samus. Has to deal being with being an anime chick with unrealistic proportions in a realistic world and maybe a bit of bimboization thrown in.)

But this is just a matter of taste and nothing worth getting angry about anyway.

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I wasn't getting angry, just establishing that that thread? part of it wouldn't have bimbo, BE AE or other stuff. It just means you have to be a bit more inventive with your writing, rather than going for the same old effects. you can have some really crazy stuff happening, you just don't use the regular array of effects. edit: alright, I'll change it a bit. samus still has the samus personality, just tweaked so her preferences are different, so she. I'll change it so samus realized what has happened to her. maybe the next upgrade could restore her mind to normal. after all, the manipulator is benevolent. the next bit I write will change samus's mind back to normal. treat her as the regular samus. sorry for killing the character.

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Dude, write whatever gets you off. Unless you're specifically writing for the approval of an audience there is literally no reason to listen to us. If you like writing identity death, do it. It's not evil.

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Don't get me wrong, I'm all for removing BE and such to force more creative changes, but did you really have to turn Samus into pedo bait first?

But anyway, don't go changing everything around just for my sake; I think everyone should be able to do things the way they want in things like this, even if I do sometimes feel compelled to complain when things get tragically skewed in a direction that goes against my own tastes. I know a lot of people don't like the processes I do, but I don't care; I like what I write, and I know there are at least some people out there who do as well. Try to take that attitude. I'll try and keep current with your updates, and if I come across something I feel like adding to, I will.

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Out of curiousity, Pyro, what WOULD you like to see happen to Samus? Regular animal tf? I remember there was one for awhile where Samus turned into a bird thing but then it turned into pregnancy fetishism and I lost interest cause that's not my thing.

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I've already made good on a lot of the things I want to see; one of my earlier posts in this topic contains all of the additions I've made to this thing. I'm mostly about breast-related changes(expansion, multiplication, lactation, etc.), butt expansion, and maybe pregnancy if done right; there's probably more, but I can't think of them now. While I have no problem with animal transformation(you are talking anthro, right?), it's not really something I enjoy on its own.

Really, my only major process-related turn-offs are Age Reduction into childhood or earlier, and major mental overhauls on established, likable(at to me) characters. Or at least those are the only ones I can think of now.

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ok pyro, I don't know how to change samus back in a really good way, and after seeing you fix up samus in the bimbo storyline, could you take a minute to restore samus in mine? I'd really appreciate that, and now I realize that mental changing samus was a bad idea. I wasn't trying to completely change her character. again, if you could, add a part that restores samus's mind.

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yeah... maybe I'll go back and split that storyline so samus is still a bird, but something else happens.

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please do, I got really irritated when people butchered the whole chozo plotline and made it egg fest 9000.

I was about to fix that myself, especially since they went roadrunner instead of donkeypunch but unarmored chozo (since that was their problem)

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I want to say something about this type of story work, I'm not a big fan of it because you leave your story idea in the hand of someone else to work with, sometimes that works great but other times you have people that just want to fuck with people and ruin a good thing

I do like this type of story as I used to love reading the 'build your own adventure' books so I do hope you guys keep up with your story even if its just you alone writing it, just make sure no one steals your story by ruining

also on a side note when writing you have to keep two thing in mind, 'do I like wha tI'm writing", and "what do my readers what to see?" stories are two sided thing you have to be happy with it and so must be your reader

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I like addventures because I'm terminally incapable of finishing a story. It's why I've only ever wrote on fictionbranches. It's not even that I can't come up with a story arc...I just get all fired up, produce a few chapters, and totally lose steam.

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Ees done.

Obviously, I figured I should keep all of the body changes you've made, as it's not really my place to undo that. I just want to mention, though, that I think I died a little inside by keeping the pedo bait body. :(

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Ok. I made a mistake, and I accept that. no more trying something like that. that storyline is officially disowned. I want nothing more to do with it. by the way pyro, will you still be expanding on your storyline?

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I plan to expand on my earlier contributions, but right now the AC adapter to my laptop is shot, and until the new one comes in, I'm stuck using the internet browser in my Wii. Turns out none of my keyboards are USB, so I have to use the Wiimote to type. It's kind of a pain.

I hope to get back to it soon, though.

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Hate to double post, but I think I'm finally back to regularly adding to this thing. Below are all the sections I've added so far, and the one in bold is my most recent.

Feel free to add your own sections anywhere in here you want. I'm specifically avoiding building onto my own sections via the "Something Else" option so anyone could interject anything they want anywhere in the storyline.

Samus shakes off the mental alterations and gets back to her usual bounty hunter self(if you don't like it, bite me).
* Samus continues on in the sex-based weapon-filled suit and comes across some enemies(lactation)
** Samus' breasts begin spraying milk constantly and uncontrollably(minor BE, lactation... duh).
*** Samus masturbates as her breasts continue spraying milk(lactation, I mean c'mon, you should expect that from me by now).
**** Samus acquires the Morph Ball(dunno, some kinda contortion, I guess?)
***** Samus acquires the Morph Ball Bomb(Butt, Hip Expansion)
** Samus' breasts engorge with large amounts of milk, making them grow to massive size(extreme BE, minor lactation).
*** Samus uses her Milk Launchers to shrink her breasts back down, and the extended use convinces the Power suit that 'additional' Milk Launchers need to be added(extreme lactation, multiple breasts).
**** Samus acquires the Morph Ball upgrade(don't worry, it's not a carbon copy of the above)
***** Samus comes to a room with a slime pit in it. She tries to wade through it, but it seeps into her skin and bloats her boobs and butt(breast/butt expansion)

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As great as this hole thing is which is awesome you guys should also post up any new paths for the story not just your own. Oh and Pyro go with option 4 or option 5 when continuing.

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That's just the thing, no one else is posting any new paths.

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Well they are you mostly have to look I mean I found one where samus becomes a bimbo named sami then becomes ridley's plaything and so on. But mostly we just have to look then post here to save time and continue it our selves.

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Why should I even care about those?

I already made clear that a great deal of the directions the story goes in aren't my thing. The only sections of the Addventure I've even read more than once were Chaos Industries's, my own, and a few of the ones leading up to my own additions.

I don't recall seeing any rule that said I had to keep track of the entire freaking story and spoonfeed every single addition to you. You can obviously get to the thing; if you want to see where else the story is going, track it yourself.

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I've started a thread right at the start. it involves the upgrade slowly changing her suit over time. I'm not going to make the same mistakes as last time. the only thing that isn't going to happen is bimbozation, but samus isn't going to notice the changes to her suit. pyrowildcat, I'd appreciate it if you contributed, but not required, and have added an option to have her notice it. not begging you here, but would like to see your take on it.
http://www.bearchive.com/~addventure...70/570220.html

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Good news, I ve continued where she had been cocooned. She's now fully mutated for all you TF fans. ;)

http://iiichan.net/stuff/be/dodge/?episode=704949

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I added a part where samus finds an underground ocean. let's see what happens. http://www.bearchive.com/~addventure...54/654038.html

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hey pyro, you still posting? haven't seen anything from you for a while. have you given up, or are there just problems?

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Noticed a new path where she finds a body altering machine

http://iiichan.net/stuff/be/dodge/?episode=714903

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there is a path where samus has slow edit's to her suit, which splits at two points. her finding the body altering machine, and her finding a one upgrade machine, and a new default template of her suit being set.
http://www.bearchive.com/~addventure...70/570220.html

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I just posted a scene where she's become a spider-woman.

Now she looks sort of like this...

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Thank you Mercury.

I'm not begging, but writers would be appreciated.

also, the storyline I started has been expanded on.

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Thanks for continuing where I left off! :3

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I added a further episode, if you'd like to elaborate on it!

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My part has been expanded, and samus had entered a maze that leads to different zones and areas. which apparently something for everyone. here is the link, but you might want to go back and see the whole storyline as well.

http://www.bearchive.com/~addventure...20/720335.html

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I checked the site, and theres been a few posts over the last 40 days.

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Sorry, that would be over the last few days.

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Remember to bio-form changing chamber? Well, I added a big section where Ridley has fun with Samus, hehheh... XD

http://iiichan.net/stuff/be/dodge/?episode=715180

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Oh yeah, I did one last night... EC/corruption.

http://iiichan.net/stuff/be/dodge/?episode=715276

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I love the one where she becomes an erotic statue. If I can figure out how to make a post inanimate TF POV interesting I'll try and write a continuation.

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I made an episode. Hoping for some future ideas to keep things interesting. I love the potential drama for a totally powerless character, but it's so hard to write about someone that can do nothing.

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I continued too, going for one year of hell. ;)

http://iiichan.net/stuff/be/dodge/?episode=735489

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I think she's pretty broken by now. Time to remake her, I'd say. I'll try and add to it tomorrow.

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And we continue.

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Samus got slimed!

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Another Bio Chamber update, with Samus getting ARed and TFed into a Metroid

http://iiichan.net/stuff/be/dodge/?episode=735360

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I know this is many months later, but I added an extra bit to the mermaid path

http://iiichan.net/stuff/be/dodge/?episode=738365

And to breeder Samus

http://iiichan.net/stuff/be/dodge/?episode=716247

Guess I guess want em noticed in some way, lol. XD

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Arise thread, arise!
So, yeah. Theres been some adding, mainly over the last 100 days. Might want to search around a bit, the most recent chain being this.
http://www.bearchive.com/~addventure...51/751005.html