"Grape's Malfunction"
 

A request from GreatDragon AD. I thought I would make it a comic layout, but I'm not too sure if I was really successful with it... that's why I'm practicing in the first place, heheh.

Well, let me know what you think.

Dude..., this is some pretty good stuff.

Good work, keep it up.

You are getting better. I am getting more feeling out of this one.

i 2nd it

Very cool, if I do say so myself. ^_^

Always great to hear from you. Top quality as always.

This is pretty sweet man. I figure it was only a matter of time before you did a GDAD girl. :)

Wow amazing. man i wish you had a site or a Deviant Art for your work. even if this is just you trying to get better its still some of the very best Process art iv seen. anyway if your looking for critisim id say her expresion in the corner of the first pannel was a little odd looking.and her starting expresion looks a little out of place.

Awesome work; the 2nd panel rocks ^_^
Thanks for posting!

nice

My pants seem to have malfunctioned.

Terrific sequence. Thank you for this excellent contribution.

Well, I dont normally post too often. However, the BE AND ass expansion in this little mini-comic is pretty damn awesome. I must now commit myself to building many churches in your honor. There badly needs to be more art like this out there. Good job.
I even like the color job! I shall re-commence being a cynical asshole now.
-EDIT-
It has come to my attention that you have posted other artwork on the forums here that I have somehow managed to miss...
Rather than revive a bunch of old threads, I thought I would just say that those other works are pretty badass too, you seem to be progressing well.
Alright...NOW I am back to being a cynical ass.

god, man, you're over 9000 ^^

Excellent work, certainly. GDAD was lucky to get you... how about some She-Hulk transformation next? ;)

Well, I told jacques how I felt on this pic yesterday so I might as well do so here. He did a stupendous job on Grape. He tried to doing comic layouts since he wanted to practice and put as many panels in one page to show the sequence. Needs more practice on expressions like someone said here but overall the pic was well done. I can't wait to see what he will work on next. Thanks again for the pic.

Beautifull!

as always another great work

very nice sequence and some nice shading and color work too! Bravo !

Nice shine effect on the nipple. :)

I don't care for some of the faces (only some of them), but that's no prob: everyone's got their own styles, so keep it up. :D

O.o
ZOMG!!!

Yeah... That about sums up my reaction. Great work!

Excellent.

Brilliant style and colouring, thanks for posting that!

awesome piece of work well done

I've not posted here often.. But I have to say AWESOME WORK

Excellent depiction of process, nicely varied POV, good coloring and shading. Some of the expressions were excellent, some less so. A very worthy offering.