Insta-Cosplay (AP AR TF Story)
 

A new story I made, with less horrible english and less narrative than before, yaaaay.

Anyways, I think it's at least better than the other one I made. It will have more parts, depending on the feedback and how much time I can spend with it.
Hope you like it! Criticism is welcome, too

http://faky3ah.deviantart.com/art/In...er-1-580228914
http://faky3ah.deviantart.com/art/In...er-2-580241630
http://faky3ah.deviantart.com/art/In...P-TF-590508720
http://faky3ah.deviantart.com/art/In...R-TF-633512054

Re: Insta-Cosplay (AP AR TF Story)
 

Think you can give me the list of chapters you already have and the characters you are using, just to see if I can help you extend on your story? I might have a few good ideas and additional chapters that could work.

Re: Insta-Cosplay (AP AR TF Story)
 

Sure ^^ tell me where do I send them.

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Send them through Google Docs the plots and I'll read them. My gmail address is luisjavier.morgado and you know the rest.

Re: Insta-Cosplay (AP AR TF Story)
 

Chapter 2 is out ^^ http://faky3ah.deviantart.com/art/In...er-2-580241630

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Aaaaand Chapter 3 is out...for a long time ago now
http://faky3ah.deviantart.com/art/In...P-TF-590508720

Re: Insta-Cosplay (AP AR TF Story)
 

Great story!

Re: Insta-Cosplay (AP AR TF Story)
 

This series is pretty cool

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Thank you for all your kind comments!
I just uploaded the 4th chapter after a long hiatus
http://faky3ah.deviantart.com/art/In...R-TF-633512054

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https://www.deviantart.com/faky3ah/a...-FTF-778884423
https://www.deviantart.com/faky3ah/a...-FTF-778884395
https://www.deviantart.com/faky3ah/a...-FTF-778884336

One of the transformations in the story got turned into a comic in case anyone is interested.

Re: Insta-Cosplay (AP AR TF Story)
 

Wonderful detail and expression!

Re: Insta-Cosplay (AP AR TF Story)
 

Thanks for the feedback!