Amahain's Stories
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Last year, I wrote this:
http://www.process-productions.com/f...ad.php?t=10538 A few months after posting that, I've been starting stories and scrapping them, never quite satisfied with how they turned out. Then I quit trying because writing is a time sink and I have other things to do. But now I'm in the mood again. This will be the thread where I upload any new story for now on. For now, I'd like to share a work in progress. It's going to be one of those never-ending x-rated stories where woman after woman turn into various kinds of demons. Naturally, constructive criticism is welcome, but I'm also looking for ideas. Aside from succubi and hellhounds, what other sorts of demons would make for good tfs? On another note, are Word documents okay with everyone? I don't mind reformatting the stories if you have trouble opening them, but I won't bother if there's no problem. |
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Loved the story! I really liked the female hell hounds would love to see more!
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Very nice, infectious demonic corruption is awesome.
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Stuff like this makes me think we should have a writing section of the site or forum, just archive some user stories here. I remember some things that I only saw posted on here that I dont have any recollection of other than their being good.
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Thanks for the feedback so far, everyone.
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I missed you so much!
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Maybe I'm just over-saturated, but it seems like every succubus transformation has the same sequence of events: horns to finger talons to wings to tail with skin color change tossed somewhere in there most of the time and cloven feet rarely showing up around the same time as the tail. Regardless I'm really looking forward to future developments. |
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There might be two factors at work, here. Firstly, it's customary for tfs to start with subtle changes and finish off with significant ones. The order you mentioned is more or less intuitive. The second factor, I suspect, is that writers unintentionally plagiarise. When I was trying to figure out how a succubus transformation would progress, my mental model was based on what I've read in other stories. I'm hoping to avoid doing that in the future by having characters transform into other types of demons. *** Again, if anyone can think of a cool looking demon, provide a detailed description or an illustration. I'll try to have a character turn into one of them as long as it's in line with my aesthetic tastes (as a general rule, it should be a "dangerous creature" and there should be no TG involved). Also, any other suggestions about where to take the story are welcome. I have a general plot, but I need to fill in some details. Once the demonic infection spreads from the apartment building, where does it go to next? Who gets infected? A nun? A police officer? A biker chick? |
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New story: "Heat in Heat". It has nothing to do with my Inanna's Demons story, but I thought I'd post it anyway.
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The new story is very nice, I like it a lot.
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I liked it. The talking heads parts dragged a bit, but aside from that I enjoyed it.
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