The Process Forum - Magic Rings

The Process Forum (http://www.process-productions.com/forum/index.php)

- Shrinking Process (http://www.process-productions.com/forum/forumdisplay.php?f=11)

- - Magic Rings (http://www.process-productions.com/forum/showthread.php?t=43889)

Interesting story.

I like the way you've described the fury and the human world.
Also how Rose describes things from her point of view.
It reminds me a bit of the point'n'click game Inherit the Earth.

I've enjoyed reading this story, except for the last part.
It went a little too fast and I'm not into diapers.

I like also the drawings.
The artist did a great job on the face expressions.

Greetings
Captain Ash

Quote:

Originally Posted by Captain Ash (Post 807304)

Thank you for the critique Ash. :)

I think there's going to be a long line of these since I know my boyfriend got one of me and Alyssa.

But yeah, I agree this was a bit short. But this is more practice for the three/four shrunken women novels I was planning on writing. :)

So any and all feed back is welcome on these exercises.