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ZZZ 07-04-2014 09:09 AM

Pixie No More 4 is now available! GTS, SW, BE
 
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Now available at ZZZ Comics: http://www.e-junkie.com/thatbumzzz

The size changing pixies are back and this time more elves are joining in on the size changing fun! Just when Sir Grindalot is about to be willingly used by the super sized and growing elven Queen Marella as a sex toy, he suddenly finds himself as a scrawny short geeky guy in a modern geeked out bedroom! Could this be the end of Pixie No More? Could it have been a dream all along? But who are all these new characters?! Find out in Pixie No More 4, the final volume(of chapter 1)! This comic contains Giantess, Shrinking Women, BE, clothes ripping/shoe busting, shrinking out of clothes, penis growth from mini giantess oral sex, two shrunken female elves body grind on penis, super size cumshot on woman face, hair and chest, giantess instertion of normal size male, giantess using building as sex toy, male muscle and height growth from mini giantess oral sex, sex with mini giantess, tall amazon growing to mini giantess, three elven women shrinking out of clothes to tiny size at the same time, women in peril, growth during sex, sex with normal size female elf along with two shrunken female elves at the same time and more!

Growth and shrinking is caused by pixie magic and cum shot. All characters are 18 or older. All images are 2893x4092. Story by ZZZ, lines by Lunareth, colors by Len.

Collectors edition is 54 pages and includes all 23 normal pages as well as the 22 pages without text. Also included is a 3 stage growth sequence of Ariana from College Grown drawn by Omar, The Resizer artist, a sketch page featuring a mini giantess growing out of a school girl outfit due to cum shot, ink page featuring 3 sexy elven women shrinking out of clothes, full color preview of Circus of Size featuring a muscle woman a sexy shrunken woman hiding under a hat, full color of Boosters 2 featuring the returning characters in a sexy new art style getting hot and naughty in the closet. And continuing a Pixie No More tradition, 3 advanced preview pages of Pixie No More 5 in line art with full dialogue are also included! And lineart of the upcoming Pixie No More poster featuring 12 of the main characters!

ZZZ Comics: http://www.e-junkie.com/thatbumzzz

Dex164 07-04-2014 11:09 AM

Re: Pixie No More 4 is now available! GTS, SW, BE
 
After having purchased all 4 collector's editions, I feel entitled to my opinion.

The "process" content has been going downhill ever since #1. Not only is there less of it but the scenes that are shown are hurried, and not at all enticing. Most growth or shrinking takes place over the course of 2 to 3 panels, and is not worth the price tag.

Unfortunately, the series of comics is suffering from Western Comics Syndrome, in which people believe we pay for the story and not the art. The storyline is mediocre, and is not worth the money either.

I recommend no one purchase this comic as the actual worthwhile content is 4 pages, the queen growing, the pink haired pixie growing taller, the main male going from nerdy to hunk, and then the 3 elf girls from #3 shrinking down in basically a poof.

I will no longer endorse this series, as it is no longer worth the money.

qzar9999 07-05-2014 02:15 PM

Re: Pixie No More 4 is now available! GTS, SW, BE
 
Well. That criticism is rather harsh. You could've been a bit more polite and constructive.

That said, you do kinda have a point.

Z, the art in this is fantastic, as usual. And what process and sex it does have are lovely. But it does feel like this issue was more plot and less size-related sexual shenanigans. I don't mind the plot, and unlike Dex I do at least find it interesting, but I think a better balance between story and fun is needed.

That said, I'm still interested in seeing what you do for Pixie 5.

jack36262001 07-05-2014 03:49 PM

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Haven't read it myself yet, do plan to if not to just complete the set. I do like it sometimes when stories are a bit more plot heavy. It adds a depth the just looking at a picture sequence. Anyways what I actually wanted to mention is these two replies are what has always impressed me about this forum. The civility of its discussions. Yes the critique is a little harsh, but it was pointed out without the condescending tone, inviting further rebuttal. Preventing it from turning into a back an forth head butting that most internet arguments do. All in all a pleasant trend that I really appreciate here.

MinMax 07-05-2014 04:04 PM

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The first one was the best in terms of process, but also the worst in terms of story. This one is my favourite since the first one. That said, there were a lot of competing elements that made none of them particularly satisfying on their own. The queen was almost not in this one, when her immense growth and overpowering lust could have probably filled half of it.

qzar9999 07-05-2014 04:18 PM

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^ I'm pretty sure she could've filled all of it.

You know. Because she's huge.

:-D

Jaran 07-08-2014 09:52 PM

Re: Pixie No More 4 is now available! GTS, SW, BE
 
Though I did enjoy this one, I can definitely see where some of the other comments are coming from. I believe I commented as much on I think Vol..... 2 or 3, but I said I'd rather see more detail on each individual sequence, rather than simply a larger number of them. There was what, 3 process sequences?

I think the problem is a "jack of all trades" problem. You've got your hands in too many different aspects of the story & situations within one issue for it to feel like any of them received any significant attention. All said we've got... 13 characters of significance who appear in this issue. 4-6 major 'scenes', depending on where you draw dividers (change of characters vs. change of scenery.)

Compare that to, say, Issue 1. Which had ONE scene, with 4 characters and FIVE process sequences.

- Grindalot Muscle/Penis
- Maid Grows
- Maid shrinks
- Starlight grows
- Nixie grows

Almost the ENTIRE comic was process. It was spectacular, and is what sold me on the series in the first place.

Issue 2: 1 scene, 5 characters, 5 sequences.

- Grindalot Muscle
- Grindalot Penis Expansion
- Starlight growth
- Alianne growth/hourglass
- Rae shrinking

And again, almost the entire comic was process material. Very small gaps between sequences.

Issue 3: 3 scenes, 12 characters, 5-6 process sequences.

- Druscilla growth/AR to young woman
- Nyxie & Alianne Growth
- Winkie Penis Expansion & Troll-ification
- Ellenora Shrink
- Rae & Ellenora growth
- Queen growth (albeit short)

Got slightly heavier on the plot (mainly the exposition with the elves), but still pretty good process to pages ratio.

When you lay it all out like that, I think it becomes clear why the reception of this issue has been a bit less than stellar. It comes off as almost... scatterbrained, with trying to cover too many plot points/characters in a single issue, and the process gets shafted as a result of needing to switch focus constantly to deliver plot.

ZZZ 07-09-2014 06:37 PM

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Quote:

Originally Posted by Dex164 (Post 733663)
After having purchased all 4 collector's editions, I feel entitled to my opinion.

The "process" content has been going downhill ever since #1. Not only is there less of it but the scenes that are shown are hurried, and not at all enticing. Most growth or shrinking takes place over the course of 2 to 3 panels, and is not worth the price tag.

Unfortunately, the series of comics is suffering from Western Comics Syndrome, in which people believe we pay for the story and not the art. The storyline is mediocre, and is not worth the money either.

I recommend no one purchase this comic as the actual worthwhile content is 4 pages, the queen growing, the pink haired pixie growing taller, the main male going from nerdy to hunk, and then the 3 elf girls from #3 shrinking down in basically a poof.

I will no longer endorse this series, as it is no longer worth the money.

I find your critique harsh not because of what you are saying, but because you never commented before on this comic. I just went through the old threads to make sure. If you had said after part 2 or 3 that you wanted to see more sex or longer sequences/more sequences then I would have made adjustments to part 4. The story is a story I am enjoying writing so that will continue as is, but I can certainly work in more sex and sequence length or panel sequence number.

As for specifics:

As you have seen in this thread there are people who like the story, and people who like the art.

"Worthwhile content" is your opinion. Some people like seeing the sexy shrunken women running around, in peril, the breast smothering, oral sex from mini giantess Starlight and other action moments and of course the size change stuff.

The elven women shrinking out of their armor is 4 panels - so that is not a poof. The start, the armor falling off in the next 2 panels and then the end where they are tiny and nude.

I always ask for feedback, but the last few giantess main focus comics have had very little feedback from the giantess enjoying crowd. The feedback really helps me steer the comics, otherwise I just go by what I enjoy or the private message feedback.

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Originally Posted by MinMax (Post 733732)
The first one was the best in terms of process, but also the worst in terms of story. This one is my favourite since the first one. That said, there were a lot of competing elements that made none of them particularly satisfying on their own. The queen was almost not in this one, when her immense growth and overpowering lust could have probably filled half of it.

Thanks Minimax, the queen will have a more page time next comic.

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Originally Posted by qzar9999 (Post 733734)
^ I'm pretty sure she could've filled all of it.

You know. Because she's huge.

:-D

Yes she is :D

Quote:

Originally Posted by Jaran (Post 733984)
Though I did enjoy this one, I can definitely see where some of the other comments are coming from. I believe I commented as much on I think Vol..... 2 or 3, but I said I'd rather see more detail on each individual sequence, rather than simply a larger number of them. There was what, 3 process sequences?

I think the problem is a "jack of all trades" problem. You've got your hands in too many different aspects of the story & situations within one issue for it to feel like any of them received any significant attention. All said we've got... 13 characters of significance who appear in this issue. 4-6 major 'scenes', depending on where you draw dividers (change of characters vs. change of scenery.)

Compare that to, say, Issue 1. Which had ONE scene, with 4 characters and FIVE process sequences.

- Grindalot Muscle/Penis
- Maid Grows
- Maid shrinks
- Starlight grows
- Nixie grows

Almost the ENTIRE comic was process. It was spectacular, and is what sold me on the series in the first place.

Issue 2: 1 scene, 5 characters, 5 sequences.

- Grindalot Muscle
- Grindalot Penis Expansion
- Starlight growth
- Alianne growth/hourglass
- Rae shrinking

And again, almost the entire comic was process material. Very small gaps between sequences.

Issue 3: 3 scenes, 12 characters, 5-6 process sequences.

- Druscilla growth/AR to young woman
- Nyxie & Alianne Growth
- Winkie Penis Expansion & Troll-ification
- Ellenora Shrink
- Rae & Ellenora growth
- Queen growth (albeit short)

Got slightly heavier on the plot (mainly the exposition with the elves), but still pretty good process to pages ratio.

When you lay it all out like that, I think it becomes clear why the reception of this issue has been a bit less than stellar. It comes off as almost... scatterbrained, with trying to cover too many plot points/characters in a single issue, and the process gets shafted as a result of needing to switch focus constantly to deliver plot.

Along with these size elements Im trying to keep sexual content decent in Pixie comics and the story interesting. Theres only so much room for everything. Sorry to hear you felt it scatterbrained, I am just trying to set things up for the coming chapters. I also am trying to involve all the characters, but I may have to go the route of focusing on some characters in one chapter, and some in the others(Grindalot will always be the focus of course - for now).

After all this feedback, I am going to have my artists go back to work on Pixie 5 which at this point is actually 90%+ complete, so it will take longer before it is ready for release with these changes. I will be adding/extending the size change/process scenes and sex content, but I will still try to keep the story moving where I want it to go. I just want you guys to know feedback makes a difference and I(and my artists) will be working hard on the Pixie 5 rework.

Jaran 07-09-2014 09:33 PM

Re: Pixie No More 4 is now available! GTS, SW, BE
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by ZZZ (Post 734046)
I also am trying to involve all the characters, but I may have to go the route of focusing on some characters in one chapter, and some in the others(Grindalot will always be the focus of course - for now).

I feel like you'll almost certainly get better feedback going this route. Not only does this lead to each individual event being more detailed, but it also means people can pick and choose which issues they're interested in, if they focus on a character/process that they particularly enjoy. (For example, I would probably skip one that focused heavily on the Elf dudes, but would absolutely be all over one that focused on Ellenora. :D)

Quote:

After all this feedback, I am going to have my artists go back to work on Pixie 5 which at this point is actually 90%+ complete, so it will take longer before it is ready for release with these changes. I will be adding/extending the size change/process scenes and sex content, but I will still try to keep the story moving where I want it to go. I just want you guys to know feedback makes a difference and I(and my artists) will be working hard on the Pixie 5 rework.
Honestly, if that's the result of our feedback, then I'm happy to have provided it. I really enjoy this series and want to support it as best I can, and you listening to feedback is certainly highly appreciated, and should lead to a better quality product for everyone to enjoy. :o I'm certainly willing to wait a little bit longer for an improved set of sequences. :)

Jaran 11-16-2014 05:21 PM

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Is there any update on this one?

I do hope our feedback didn't kill this series, it was probably my favorite one. :(

ZZZ 11-16-2014 05:33 PM

Re: Pixie No More 4 is now available! GTS, SW, BE
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Jaran (Post 740615)
Is there any update on this one?

I do hope our feedback didn't kill this series, it was probably my favorite one. :(

I appreciate the feedback but it did make me realize I had to take some time off on this series to work on the story more instead of having the art team working non stop on Pixie. The good news is part 5 was almost finished when part 4 was released, and I made some changes to part 5 following this feedback. The bad news is there probably wont be a part 6 for some time.

More good news, the Pixie art team is working on another comic set in the same world with completely different characters and story called "Special Ingredients" which will be finished early next year. Pixie 5 should be out some time in the next couple months, Either December or Jan/Feb.

MinMax 11-16-2014 09:39 PM

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I would like to chime in that I adore this series, and I would love to see more of it. I'm really looking forward to part 5.


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