Watch Your Tongue 3 - Shrink Fan Comics
Tiny Talks To Towering - Watch Your Tongue 3 is out now!
https://i.imgur.com/aWiDGk3.jpg An increasingly small and desperate Nat seeks help from the formerly shrunken (and now gigantic) Mandy in the third and final issue of Watch Your Tongue! https://i.imgur.com/fc5NeST.jpg https://i.imgur.com/7cjcXfB.jpg Synopsis: Now that Nat has the shrinking curse, can she learn the lesson that Mandy did or will she shrink away to nothingness? Release date: August 1st, 2018 Written by: a0040pc Lineart by: Michela Da Sacco Colors by: Ylenia Di Napoli Tags: shrinking, shrunken woman, giantess, micro, handheld, magic Series Link: Watch Your Tongue Download this comic and every other in our catalog with a single 1-month membership to ShrinkFan.com ALSO: What did you think about Watch Your Tongue 3? Let us know your feedback to help us improve! |
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fantastic, loved this one
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I would say most of this comic is decent.
I do like the hand held and measuring scenes. The size comparison at the end it really good also. The story transitions smoothly from scene to scene. It also conveys a passage of time. The art looks better this time around. It is also maintains size consistency better. What I think could be improved is the pace of the story and the shrinking scenes. The passage of time seemed to fast to me. I also, didn't like how it ended. With the shrinking I think it doesn't really show it smoothly and less like jump cuts. At least for me it needed better reference points to make it easier to show her shrinking. |
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This comic was not very interesting from a story perspective. The boyfriend is unbelievable. Art is OK but every shrinking process seemed to involve the same setup, outfit, and progression. It was repetitive and not in a good way.
Chapter 02 was OK, but this comic kinda dragged on. I am hoping this series is put on ice and that other writers are given a chqnce who might understand how to create tension or or write smarter characters who don't act like drugged-out bitches. |
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In response to the feedback: the Watch Your Tongue series is effectively finished. The writer felt the story was played out with this one. |
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