Werewoman Sequence
 

So I've been playing around in Daz Studio, figured I'd make a sequence with it. You can view it here, http://adiabaticcombustion.deviantar...oman-495146265. Fair warning it's a pretty huge file size.

Let me know what you think.

Re: Werewoman Sequence
 

Not too bad.

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I'll admit the girl proportions are a little skewed, but it's a decent transformation.

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Definitely a solid early product. Thx for sharing

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Glad to see another TG artist. Now for the criticism.

1. Nipples are weird.
2. Upper portion is too thin for lower proportion, so either make lower smaller or give her some meat up top.
3. Boobies too small.

Re: Werewoman Sequence
 

Think this is a good sequence and for a first attempt it's great, cant wait to see more of these or your writing.

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Great job! You're on the right track!

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Glad to see someone else step up and do some work but just some general criticisms from an artistic/anatomical perspective...

1) Toes do not flex like that

2) Voluptuous bottom half, fashion model upper half, does not mix.

3) The hair (when growing) was obviously a repeated pattern and did not look natural.

4) The bust that grew did not match the bust she ended up with. The change was much bigger initially.

But please, take these as constructive criticisms! I mean no ill will and if I did not express that well enough, tell me. I always want to give a positive but progressive response to new artists.

Re: Werewoman Sequence
 

Thanks for the tips man, I'll keep it in mind for the next time around.

Re: Werewoman Sequence
 

I try. Best of luck to you! Hope you continue quickly:)