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Valeyard Vince 12-01-2021 05:35 AM

Birdsong Rising - Shrink Fan Comics
 
A Song of Strength and Shrinking - Birdsong Rising is out now!

https://i.imgur.com/2vdMBEL.jpg

There's a new hero in town, and she packs a lot of dynamite into a small package! Check out the superhero action (and sexy fun) in the debut issue of Birdsong Rising!

https://i.imgur.com/nm1njas.jpg https://i.imgur.com/5xG6wej.jpg

Synopsis: When a young woman gains the ability to shrink, project intense sound waves, and glide, she becomes the superheroine Birdsong. Her song is one of triumph and tragedy. How does it end?

Release Date: December 1st, 2021
Written By: Mac Rome
Artwork By: Victor Serra
Tags: shrinking, shrunken woman, superheroes, doll-size, multiple shrunken women, elongating neck, rubbergirl, shrinking out of clothes, shrunken woman on penis, cum shower, pleasure, m/f, sex, science

Issue Link: Birdsong Rising

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ALSO: What did you think about Birdsong Rising? Let us know your feedback to help us improve!

JoeBlue 12-01-2021 08:19 PM

Re: Birdsong Rising - Shrink Fan Comics
 
I can't read it when selecting the "view in browser" option.
it's the only one having that issue

qzar9999 12-02-2021 02:16 AM

Re: Birdsong Rising - Shrink Fan Comics
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by JoeBlue (Post 852025)
I can't read it when selecting the "view in browser" option.
it's the only one having that issue

Vince doesn't check these threads as often as I do, so I'll mention it to him directly just in case.

Also, don't forget that we have a support ticket system directly on the website - if something like this happens again, please use that to bring it right to our attention!

Tiedefender 12-02-2021 05:20 AM

Re: Birdsong Rising - Shrink Fan Comics
 
Having read the comic and thought about it, I can only say it is okay. I'll try and list some pros and cons first.

Pros:
The art is decent. Fitting well with the super hero theme.
The demonstration and use of her powers is nice.
Good to see a variety of heroes and villains.

Cons:
Sex scenes come off as forced.
Story moves to fast. We get told of friendship and not see it build.
Comic doesn't know what it wants to be. Is it about Birdsong's powers, love life, trying to be about a rising star?

While it is focused on the heroine, it isn't focused on a plot. Things just sort of happen. This comic has potential. However I feel it was lost do to pacing. To much there and not enough fleshing out.

Doll-Elf 12-02-2021 10:44 AM

Re: Birdsong Rising - Shrink Fan Comics
 
Major buzzkill with death of the focus character.


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