Henry: The Girl Next Door (Offsite)
 

Ever wondered if someone had a secret crush on you but was too nervous to say anything? The Secret Admirer Charm can solve all that, but when you mix love and magic, things tend to get very complicated, very fast. Such is the case with Henry and Janet, who are going to be drawn closer together than they ever dreamed.

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Re: New from praedatorius, Henry: The Girl Next Door
 

Not bad, not bad at all....but now a good sequel to that story would to have him go about his day as his body suffer from a rare reaction to that magic charm's effect

Re: New from praedatorius, Henry: The Girl Next Door
 

Eh the retro theme kind of killed it for me. I hate the whole "all dolled up" thing. Too fake.

Very well written, though. Its hard to find a detailed, thought out, and well-articulated piece of fiction.

Re: New from praedatorius, Henry: The Girl Next Door
 

I love the Rosy the Riveter scene.

Re: New from praedatorius, Henry: The Girl Next Door
 

That was so much fun to write! It just seemed to fit. 1942, factory full of women, not a lot of men around: someone was thinking about it.

Re: New from praedatorius, Henry: The Girl Next Door
 

Well written, detailed, thought out, and well articulated? Oh! I think I might faint! XD
Thanks!