Sweet Dreams
 

Warning Contains: Cute Demons, TG, Chocolate TF
Warning: Future picks of this comic are like to also contain Pregnant, and Vore scenes

yee be warned!

Suprise! I actually drew a comic with female in it.
I think this comic is finally far enough along to where I can give it its own thread and on something other than the "...and everything else board" since its got female in it.
This comic has so much in it I didn't know where to put it exactly so TG board it goes since its the first TF in the comic and a somewhat large factor in it.

Comments and questions are welcome.

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I liked it but I have no idea what the hell's going on....

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Guess I should explain some things then...
Dream Master is an entity demon the resides in the dream world and can hunt down sleepers and take there souls, much like Nightmare on Elm street. Dream Master however attacks the dreamer though desire, sin, or the person own fantasy in a totally twisted version of course. (Just like how a genie never gives you exactly what you wish for). Dream Master after word extracts the souls and takes it back to dream land to live there in a new life.

Through these souls of pure essence (like the naga in the beginning. He was once a dreamer) that live in a new fantasy world, Dream Master watches them and through interactions and relationships with them like a family he tries to learn to feel like they do. to feel things like love, hope, courage and even despair anger and sadness. He alone a creature from a diffrent plain of existence cannot feel on his own as humans do.

Specificly in this comic Dream Master has a bit of a sweet tooth as he wonders into the mind of another dreamer. and turns himself into a devilish imp cook to change the dreamer into a chocolate treat. In this case the treat happens to be a succubus candy so he becomes a she.

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I like it. cant wait to see what comes next :)

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that was pretty much awesome... 'really'd love to see what's coming up!

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Cute chocobus. I hope you deliever on the vore.

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I just hope we get one full-body look at the new girl before she is consumed. This is a wonderfully sexy transformation, but seeing the end product in one complete package would be a perfect capper.

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Man, this is a really nice TF. Can't wait for the next installment!

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well drawn if a bit freaky.:)

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Freaky, but good! I really like the color transitioning.

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That was very nice

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Hey, you forgot to tell us how you got the caramel inside the milk chocolate!

*snicker*

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Page 6 enjoy ^_^

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Me DarkTranswar Like, me want something sweet right now....:)

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Is there something wrong with me to have the first thing I think be, "He would get so sick eating that much chocolate."?

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i was thinking more like, " what was the point of adding a tail and horns if hes just gonna eat him?"

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*is reminded of Majin Buu from DBZ*

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Nothing wrong with you. Comic should be clearer if it solid chocolate or hallow. Maybe the breasts are the cream filled kind. and shouldnt he pop her chocolate covered cherry first.



More to eat?

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Me want more!

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@_______@

It be scary! That's why I like it! X3 I can't wait to see what happens next!

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Why do people eat chocolate bunnies at Easter, when they could get the same amount of chocolate for less money in the form of a standard chocolate bar?

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The gummi bear will play its part in due time for those who havent guessed it yet.

There is a grammer error in frame 2. Its meant to say "things a bit more" just to clear it up a bit.

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Me DarkTranswar thank you Grand Storm. Me DarkTranswar hungry for more Please:)

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This is... wonderful! I HEART IT IMMENSLY!

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Who says chocolate is bad for you ^_^

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Nice underwear poppin. ^^

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^^ Very well done.

Can't wait till the next page, despite not being big on vore.

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WOW, this sequence is getting pretty damn good! :D

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yay update! ^^

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Should I be aroused or hungry?

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It is turning out to be rather bad for our hapless mortal friend here.

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I'd be interested in seeing this continuing, interesting work on it so far

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Deliciously entertaining. I wish I had a chocubus to snack on....among other things..

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Sorry its taking so long on this next page. Haven't had a ton of time for it. So while you wait I decided to Reveal Dream Master's history and life to its full enjoy

Dream Master was not always dream master, and also a good reason his appearance is so mix of beauty and beast. Dream Master was actually an angel once who pondered humans so much yet could not understand them like god could. So one day he discended heaven to meat one. A fair child. The child was amazed as the Dream Master questioned him about life. He found only innosence in the child a heavenly innosence that no adult did and began to learn what corruption was.

Once the dream master had returned to heaven God found he was no longer pure, but tainted with the thoughts of mortal men. He found the eternity of questions within the young angel and casted him from heaven, but if a confused fear the dream master fell trying to plummet back to earth, but found himself caught along the way. Trapped by god the angel crashed into a white void. an eathral plain between heaven and hell.

Shattered the angel screamed into the void as his spirit corrupted and fell becoming wild his hair went from silver to jet black. Tears of blood filled his eyes as his voice shook the eternal void. A black fur covered his flesh as he snarled forming a wolfs muzzle Great wild ears adorning his head. Frightened by what he was becoming the angel tried to return to his purity but found it impossible to fully destroy the corrupted beast now within him and found his angelic form disfigured from its former glory. Red tears stained his chheks and eyes as wolf like eyes pierced anywhere they looked. His giant wolf like ears crowned him like never before in a silver glory.
The Dream Master cried to himself in a pain of loneliness in the white void his tears and voice his only friends for many years, but one moment lost in time he rose from himself the eternal void blanketing his body. Face forever staid with tears he once had. His tears were no more however they ran dry over the years as did his feelings.
It took much thought for the Dream Master to realize what the void he found himself in was. It was not a void entirely but a realm. One that could be easily molded to the persons imagination. Little had he known it was the doorway to the eathral realm of dreams. Later Dream Master found he could open doorways from one subconscious to another. Like jumping into minds. Dream Master studied humans and the fantasies of there dreams for decades before trying to make contact with them. But each time he himself made personal contact the reaction was what would become known as a nightmare. Dream Master contact spun the victim into a chaos that woke them and tossed him from there mind. Decades of more of this and Dream Master learns to control the nightmares to his advantage enough to make contact. However by mistake the human dies as The controlled Chaos becomes to much for them. Frightened of what to do he finds a glowing marble within the body of the human and takes it with him to the void holding it tightly as he drifted. This soul helped him to establish a paradise through which souls could live in his void happily. They brought it to life with twisted human imagination.
Slowly souls began to fill the void making the dream Master more a caretaker or mother to them as they went about bending the void to there pleasures like he had before them. This then lead to the dream master we know now.

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No offense, but that back story caused me to roll my eyes until they popped out of my head fly high into the air and attain geosynchronous orbit with the earth. It's about as bad as every other 'I made a character' story I read on every possible fanfiction site ever made (angels! god and or gods! fallen angels! pop tarts are lifeblood!). You would be a lot better off not saying ANYTHING like that, tell nothing of the character at all and just let people make up their own minds, instead of jamming 'god is a dick that created everything and all things knows all and so on but makes angels out of cardboard that turn to mush when they get wet, then throws them away instead of, oh I don't know, helping them'.

I'm not exactly a fan of the whole attempt at justifying character murder with sad back story thing but the tfs are interesting enough to keep me looking at them, but the more back story you add the the less likely I'll be to even bother to click your next thread. Keep it simple and reveal small bits or nothing at all. It's better without the story to clog up the gears. :)

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I'm with you, test. It's such a Mary-Sue it's almost embarrassing, but hey, the art's good, so :shrug:

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Thats the thing about back stories and characters there just like art. You get practice from them, the more you do them the better you get. I'm sorry if DM is overloading with stereo types, He is more meant to be like a modern day legend or myth as well as being the first character I actually ever created.
I do have better thought out character's but they are more serious story types that arn't leashed to TF and such.

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I'm rather neutral when it comes to stereotypes. Yeah, sure, they can get old very quickly, but if they are pulled off well even the most dusty and used idea can turn into something special. But yeah, the art is good, and that will keep me going to this thread. Keep up the good work.

There, I said it. *Does a 'poof' tf into a lurker once more*

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Now this is art. It's so delightfully perverse that I can't help but feel excited.

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*crawls up half dead with a pen melted to his hand* I know its been forever since an actual update, but here it is... *dies*


What you thought it was over? nope not yet hehehe ^_^

Wow I'm at page nine and DM is still playing with his food... wonder how many pages it will take to get him back to dream land? I wonder if he will pig out alone or if someone is gonna help him eat all that chocolate...

Fear the gummi, Fear it I say! >_>

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That has to be the strangest C-section ever. Still strangely fun, though.

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Nope your not blind its still going!

where are we now... ? ah yes, too page ten!

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I must say this is one of the sequences I look forward to most on this board, but the dialogue on this one makes virtually *no* sense. I can't even tell if I'm reading the word balloons in the right order. >.<

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I know. The problem I tend to have on comics is not enough space to word things out, and explain them better. Sadly If I did this the whole thing would be text bubbles so let me try to explain some.

We have jumped ahead a few moments after which he has eaten the gummi. Near death now the soul finds it is in close contact with Dream Master's and accidentally begins to Syphon off his memories. Dream Master however snaps him back to reality telling him this. and plunges his hand into the belly. He then pulls a pure orb which is the soul. Notice the color matches the eyes from previous pages. Dream Master then sighs not knowing exactly what to do with so much chocolate... (this is where things got toughest with so little room) Basicly the soul sees his body on the bed, and after hearing DM thinks he has an Idea of how to fix it.

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a very nice comic I read it several times now. sadly it seems that the comic is going to end soon. would have liked to see more of his/her "torture" with the gummi.. I still don't really understand why he turns him into chocolate when he doesn't know what to do with it. I think at first he wanted to eat him why not now?
but anyways great work I'm curious to see what happens next :)

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I love your work Sir!

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Simply scrumtrulescent! I look forward to the next installment. In other words, MOAR!

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*Room mates walks into room next day and finds a giant chocolate lady in jim's bead*

"I knew he was into some fucked up shit, but this takes the cake.."

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Now, I understand this is the TG forum and not the (conspicuously absent) Inanimate forum, but you just blew past a highly awesome/creative/sexy process ever. At least in my eyes. :cool:

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OMG IT LIVES!


This page has taken much much longer than it should have and oddly one of few I can say I'm proud of how it came out. enjoy the ending of the twisted tale and I hope to hear from you guys on what you thought. thanks for the support all of you. I hope to bring more comics in the future.

Sorry for bad grammer and confusion in earlier pics to the comic. above all else this comic was very trial and error learning for me and worked pretty well actually.

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Ahhh i love this comic.

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+2 for complete change and mind change.