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On-Na 10-11-2011 06:43 AM

Billie's Wish (Offsite)
 
Hey there TG lovers, thanks for the warm reception given for my last post, It has been pretty fun drawing TG so I thought Id start a small comic series called Billies wish, want to know why it is called Billies wish click on the link and see.

Billies Wish pt.01
http://on-na.deviantart.com/gallery/33147750#/d4ci4t6



Will post the next pages and so on, on this thread stay tuned.

blackshirtboy 10-11-2011 07:15 AM

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Amazing use of colour, as well as some pretty nice alternate renderings of billy and mandy. The process as well was very well done.

Reif 10-11-2011 03:08 PM

Re: TG series Billies wish
 
Wow, that was excellent. I would put you right up there with Smooch in terms of sequence quality. I especially like your emphasis on the eyes and face, two areas that I often notice that artists will de-emphasize in favor of BOOBS! and HIPS! please keep it up. Also I'm really enjoying how you manage to make your girls believably, wonderfully understated, yet believably feminine as opposed to the often heavier handed approach of slapping E cup and up breasts on the resulting woman.

What little fault I could pick at would simply be the rather simplistic and cliche things Billy says. I can't count how many times I've seen the "It's gone!" anvil dropped. Given the character I think an implicit statement would be more powerful and less basic maybe something like "Is this a?! Am I a g..g..?!!"

roycet000 10-11-2011 03:47 PM

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Great Sequence! Looking forward to seeing more in the future!

riderkid 10-11-2011 04:43 PM

Re: TG series Billies wish
 
somehow i think the personalities are gonna collide...into female insano

Dr. Otto 10-11-2011 06:43 PM

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Great stuff, although I can't help but wonder why Billy would want to be like Mandy, of all people.

I hope the sequel shows the transformed Billy running into the original Mandy. I'd love to see her reaction. (Duplication TG always catches my attention.)

On-Na 10-11-2011 06:50 PM

Re: TG series Billies wish
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Reif (Post 612398)

What little fault I could pick at would simply be the rather simplistic and cliche things Billy says. I can't count how many times I've seen the "It's gone!" anvil dropped. Given the character I think an implicit statement would be more powerful and less basic maybe something like "Is this a?! Am I a g..g..?!!"

Yes you are right I could spice up the dialogue an easy fix.

On-Na 10-11-2011 06:54 PM

Re: TG series Billies wish
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by riderkid (Post 612409)
somehow i think the personalities are gonna collide...into female insano

You hit the nail on the head, he still has his own personality but it has been twisted into Mandie's so he/she will behave differently to the original a Mandy which understands Billies way of thinking.

riderkid 10-11-2011 07:03 PM

Re: TG series Billies wish
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by On-Na (Post 612425)
You hit the nail on the head, he still has his own personality but it has been twisted into Mandie's so he/she will behave differently to the original a Mandy which understands Billies way of thinking.

still...hearing bildy yell SCIENCE would be fun.

Adakimel 10-11-2011 09:27 PM

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Noice!

P F 10-13-2011 07:50 PM

Re: TG series Billies wish
 
Something I've noticed is characters in these sequences tend to look more attractive somewhere in the middle of the sequence. It certainly holds true here


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