Cloud in color
 

Yes, I know it has been done before, and probably better. But it was my first attempt at TG, so I guess I don't feel all that bad. Done with pencils then colored in photoshop by my partner..here ya go.

cute.
the hair looks a little funny to me.
but then again, cloud always had weird hair

I like the coloring for Cloud's clothing, which you gave some detail to in the upper-half. The added moogle is a nice touch.

The breasts seem a little... odd-shaped. Perhaps the left one just seems a tad bit too small. And Cloud has too much of a baby-doll face in this picture, in my opinion. I recommend leaning toward a more adrogynous face.

And, oh, what if she had a skirt, instead of pants? That would look excellent on that picture, in my opinion.