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Re: Teen Titan Starfire WG
 

May I be the first to say that was a complete and utter load of shit.




Pardon my lack of pirate-talk, but it's just that bad I have to state it off the bat as such.

Re: Teen Titan Starfire WG
 

Be warned, brutal honesty is a punishable offense here, cap'n.

Re: Teen Titan Starfire WG
 

An interesting story if I may be frank I think you need to work on color consistency your character (starfire) seems to have her uniform break on page 3 and it turns to blue on page 4 but then at the top of page 5 for 3 panels it turns back to purple then back to blue.
Over all I'd give it a solid B+

Re: Teen Titan Starfire WG
 

I can't tell if it's all done in MS Paint, or if you drew this out by hand and then tried to color it in MS Paint; in the end, it's pretty poor as wank material.

Re: Teen Titan Starfire WG
 

Erm... Maybe you should start with a 5th grade spelling class.
Then check it's consistent, and also check for out of character moments (of which there were plenty) those can kind of ruin a story too.

It's just hard to take something seriously with words like "quitted".

Re: Teen Titan Starfire WG
 

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wow.

Re: Teen Titan Starfire WG
 

It be lookin' like I be in the mob mentality fer this topic.

Re: Teen Titan Starfire WG
 

If I'm not mistaken it was Lorekeep himself who said "If you don't have anything nice to say, don't say it at all." So let this be a warning to you Cap, watch what you say when reviewing art or you'll be walking the plank, ya get me?

Re: Teen Titan Starfire WG
 

Aye, that might be true, but no one else be against sayin' this sorta thing fer this land-lubber's wares.

Re: Teen Titan Starfire WG
 

Wrong way: Ugh, this is the worst art I've ever seen. It stinks!

Right way: Ehhh, you need a little more practice. If this is what you want to do, keep trying.

And besides, he said he did this comic a long time ago. Its not his current art style.

Re: Teen Titan Starfire WG
 

If ye be goin' soft on this type, they be only goin' to perpetuait their current methods, and never progress.

Trust me, I be seein' it all over the place, there be this one guy who be drawin' the same damned circles in MSpaint fer more than ten years, and has the gull to say he be progressin' in his art style, with no viable evidence to prove it.