Course of the Heart (Incomplete)
 

By: Magical_TG

Introduction: After a coming out gone wrong, Lilia is forced move out. Her brother stumbles upon something she left behind, a spell. Eventually, curiosity overwhelms and he begins to gather the ingredients. What does one have to lose? However when circumstances change, our hero is forced to choose between pursuing his dreams or the girl of his dreams.

The title of my short story is called Course of the Heart. As of now it is done but I'll be editing it some more before submitting it to Doc's Lab. I put it in two formats if you don't have Word. Enjoy!

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Not bad so far. Keep up the good work.

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Really? Good because I was holding back. Here's Chapter 2.

EDIT: Forgot about the summary.

Summary: After encountering his own creation; our hero begins his changes. Will he stick with his heart or be defeated by the new challenges that await him/her. And what are these mysterious dreams about a diner? What do they mean?

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Thats actually pretty good. The main character atleast is well defined and motivated. So far you have a great start to a "story" style piece of fiction (as opposed to the one-off pieces). You might want to read Bek de Corbin's work (should be linked in the favorite fiction thread) for other excellent examples of "story" style fiction. Looking forward to chapter 3.

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Actual characters are a plus. Transformation authors (that I have read) jump into things a little too quickly for my taste. As a result their characters seem flat. Kudos.

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Great story so far, can't wait to read more.

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I'm looking forward to the next chapter. It was great how he wasn't actually turned into a girl just yet, but actually had the world bend to it until he would be transformed.

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Ah, it's been a few days huh? I've been busy with life and all. Got to have that morning bowl of inspiration before picking up a pen right? Or in this case a keyboard! Here's chapter 3. I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it.

No intro this time. Really tired. Need bed :rolleyes:

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Very good read. Enjoying it quite a bit and wondering if his "sister" was always his sister. Hehe...Looking forward to the next installment.

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wow an engaging piece of tg literature?

Fantastic bravo

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The next chapter is going to take a bit longer. I'm trying to develop Jenny's character as the main character is moving on to his meeting with her. They say patience is a virtue.

Meanwhile, why not look at my past work(s)?

http://doc.erazor-zone.de/forum/view...php?f=20&t=982

This got accepted recently, it's TG and gradual, however it involves a bit of 'anthro-cat' morphing. Not too much to distract from the actual TG, anyway, enjoy!

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Oh that story was you? Liked that immensely as well and had already read it :P. Good job :).