The Haruhi Armband (Complete)
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Hey there!
The "Refresh" sequel is currently postponed, so I can't gaurantee any release. I'm a little stuck on what outfit a TG'd Asuka may give a TG'd Shinji to wear. So any suggestions, and descriptions of a outfit might be nice. And now to what this is really about. I thought it was about time someone was transformed into Haruhi Suzumiya. Anyway, here's a quick synopsis: A young man, who isn't enthusiastic about cosplay finds a cosplay item which turns him into his favourite character. Does also contain some slight woman to man TG, but not as detailed as the first TG sequence. Please read and deliver feedback :). UPDATE: I just put it on to Deviantart (I think I did, if it's not there, then I screwed up). http://apsm.deviantart.com/ |
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I enjoyed it, being the fan of the Haruhi series I am. The mental changes were well done and overall it was described nicely!
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With all due respect, wouldn't it've just been easier to've written a Haruhi/Kyon fanfic?
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Anime change, good!
Well-described TF, good! I likey! :D |
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can I ask? cuz there's this one bit i'm confused about. the part where she strips naked to look at herself, down to her ribbons and socks and shoes. there's a bit more transformation, and then her undershirt turns into a bra and stuff. isn't she naked? why is the undershirt-bra still on her? and if it's off her, how would she know about it changing? is she looking at it, rather than looking at herself? just a bit of perspective-ambiguity there.
overall technically adept and well-written, if not fantastically innovative. more! |
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Are there other stories or pictures like this? I know that there is a lot of TGed HS characters art out there, but I'm referring to actual transformation. Is there anything like that?
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There's this: http://koohart.deviantart.com/art/CM...u-TF-115014571
Is this the kinda thing you meant? |
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I get mentioned :D
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Yeah, but I already saw that before I posted this. Thanks, though.
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it might have something to do with the fact that those who do mysteriously dissapear. |
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