From darkness comes light, the story (AP, BE, TF, FtF)
 

Ten hours, spread over two days... That's how long it took me to write down the scenario to my first personal sequence, "From darkness comes light". I typed the last word of this at 1 PM eastern, just seconds before going for lunch.

To some, the ending might be a bit rushed, but I tapped myself dry. That's what happened when you pour all you got into what you do.

I hope you guys will like it.

Re: From darkness comes light, the story (AP, BE, TF, FtF)
 

Nice

Re: From darkness comes light, the story (AP, BE, TF, FtF)
 

I saw your sequence on dA before reading the story, but both are great.

I liked how you made the changes very slowly and detail, writing about them as an actual process instead of using numbers and writing.com-like phrases like "she got a DDD cup" to describe the changes going on. The hours you spent writing this story show.

I also like the actual concept itself - demon to angel. Don't see many of those on any site, much less The Process.

All in all, a good story.