Expansion Art Critiques
 

"Bigger is always better" that's the kind of stuff we think on this site. But it takes a bit of talent to be able to draw some massive proportions after a certain point. I want this thread to be opened to use Expansion artists who want to improve our style.

http://th07.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/...ts-d8b3hz9.jpg

This is a cover for a Mass Effect Expansion series I have in mind. I have another one that is Samara vs Morinth.

http://th05.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/...ts-d8bap9o.jpg
This one was just an ASS EXPANSION practice with DC's Cheetah. AE is a bit trickier so I would really appreciate some feedback.

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I like your work. Well done. And I hope this becomes a thread that other artists can jump into for feedback.

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Thanks man, I really want to improve my art. I love drawing women with massive tits and/or Ass, but I want to make sure I draw them well. I'm also alway looking for suggestions as to what to draw for my next piece. Something with Ass Expansion.

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http://th05.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/...ts-d8bcly6.jpg
Another AE attempt. Samus's ass sudden begins to balloon outward. As she goes for help, her tits start growing as well. As she tries to leave, her ever growing ass get's stuck in the door way.

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You're off to a very good start so far.

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Thanks man, but I am kind of hoping for some feed back. What am I doing right and what do I need to fix.

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Oh. Sorry then, I'm less good at picking apart things like that unless there's obvious flaws.

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Crap, it took me a moment to figure out what was happening. She's stuck in a door correct?

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Yup. One flaw I've already seen is that her ass is too high up; meaning that she's already filled up the room behind her. But for that to happen she would of had to of been in a janitors closet or something.

What I'm mainly looking for is how to portray the rest of her lower region, since Ass Expansions effect the hips, thighs, waists, ect. ect., it makes it a bit more difficult.