"Grape's Malfunction"
 

A request from GreatDragon AD. I thought I would make it a comic layout, but I'm not too sure if I was really successful with it... that's why I'm practicing in the first place, heheh.

Well, let me know what you think.

Dude..., this is some pretty good stuff.

Good work, keep it up.

You are getting better. I am getting more feeling out of this one.

i 2nd it

Very cool, if I do say so myself. ^_^

Always great to hear from you. Top quality as always.

This is pretty sweet man. I figure it was only a matter of time before you did a GDAD girl. :)

Wow amazing. man i wish you had a site or a Deviant Art for your work. even if this is just you trying to get better its still some of the very best Process art iv seen. anyway if your looking for critisim id say her expresion in the corner of the first pannel was a little odd looking.and her starting expresion looks a little out of place.

Awesome work; the 2nd panel rocks ^_^
Thanks for posting!

nice

My pants seem to have malfunctioned.

Terrific sequence. Thank you for this excellent contribution.