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Sapphire (Complete)
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Hi,
As you can perhaps tell I'm new after being a lurker for some time, and have finally decided to participate in the community. As this forum emerged as the hub for my diverse pallet, I began to wonder if i could contribute anything as art seems the core of this site and I'm not particularly gifted with it, though I can say that my strength lies in writing. Also my interest in TG, among others, has got me thinking and I wondered if we could not bring more to it, in terms of fantasy bleeding into reality. After some time I decided how to do it and my contribution, hopefully the first of many, can be found her here. A little story I call "Sapphire" from anime fandom. See you soon. |
Good work, really enjoyed the story. I especially liked how you gave greater depth into the description of the transformations as each took place. Well done
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i agree dang that was good and so detailed and describtive nice work
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Wow that was great, I hope you write more.
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Incredible detail! Very well done. The pedicure thing seemed just a touch out of place, but I'm not familiar with the anime this is based off of.
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Yes, your quite right in the final part seeming out of place though I did it as a kind of ironic gag. The character Kanu is portrayed, in both the manga and anime, as a reserved, mysterious and enigmatic warrior who's behaviour is neither what would be considered overtly masculine or feminine, so I thought that our transformee discovering such a distinctly feminine thing after the transformation would give a funny twist at the end of it..............
Or maybe it's just one of my fetishes stirring again. (smile) |
For those of you unfamiliar with Ikki Tousen, it's basically a retelling of Romance of the Three Kingdoms set in a Japanese high school setting. The character names are their Japanese equivalents; Kanu Unchou, for example, is Guan Yu.
(In Ikki Tousen, many of the male characters from ROTK are now female, including Kanu Unchou; Guan Yu's famously long beard was changed to her having very long hair instead.) |
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