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Unread 08-07-2007   #14
Banana_of_Doom
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Okay, I'll give ya some more.

The first one- (Wolf, Dog? I can't tell) Another attempt at perspective I suppose? The angles aren't workin out there. Her back half isn't 'connected' to her front half properly, and those feet aren't doin it for me. Though I do like her expression.

Number 2, the frog- I like the pose here. No true glaring problems, either. The bottom leg... I dunno... I'm getting the impression that it's more or less in front of her torso.

Now for the moo moo... I'll say right off her neck is too long, and too thin. Bovines have a thick neck. The udders aren't done properly either. The udders would be hanging down between the legs, though still coming off the front. It just looks like it's tacked on to her. And also, due to the udders, her waist has the appearance of being too long, though the far leg tells me it's not.

The udders don't like like they're hanging down from one point, it looks like they're stuck on her stomach as well as her legs.


I won't critique the plants, not my thing. =P

Sorry if I was a bit forward, the harshness of my own critics probably rubbed off on me.
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