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Wow, you're just getting better and better, Skiff.
Couple Things:
While having Joanna's breasts inflate at the bottom of page 10 is a funny gag, when it shows Joanna and Katt next to each other in page 11, Joanna's breasts are back to being the same size as Katt's, when in page 10 they were proportionately much larger. If you want to make a joke out of it, great, but not having the changes stick so much as one page seems kind of strange. Besides, if Joanna's breasts are going to wind up being large enough to block off the hallway as we saw in your preview sketch, they should probably keep that size increase anyways.
The same critique could go for the bunny in page 12- it seems to be larger than the supposedly "finished" transformation- but that can be easialy explained as the continued effects of the mutagen, so long as you let the villianess or some other character explain it as such with a quick line somewhere.
Also, Katt's dialogue in page 12 is fabulous. I"m beginning to love her "I"m just trying to go through my day" attitude, while Joanna is actually trying to particpate proactively in this slight against natural law as she percieves it. It gives two very different perspectives to the comic that work off each other very well.
Keep it up. I always check the forum for your thread specifically each day before I leave for work and when I get back. It's one of the best process-related comics I look forward to.
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