[PrBlahBlahtson]

Quick, spontanious, with no real previous connection to the characters... Let me be clear, I am not saying that it's bad, but it doesn't exactly grab and hold the attention, or make any sense by itself. I suppose it might make more sense when put in context of the "again", but I didn't find it by quickly browsing your deviantArt gallery. I did see the sequence you'd done, and that didn't seem to be all that bad either.

I didn't really want to reply in the thread because it didn't seem to be anything that would be all that... desirable, as feedback. I always feel bad if I have something not-positive to say about an artist's work, and usually the good stuff's already said.

Y'got the right idea, but you didn't hit a home run with it, that's all. Doesn't mean you're doing anything wrong. Keep working at it and I'm sure you'll do fine.