Hmm... I'm always impressed by how many ways my work gets around but so little is spoken about it, in spite of the fact that I'm always looking for feedback but never get anything productive. And here I thought the rape and ownership themes would be the most attacked and "discussion" provoking.
So, what I'm hearing is that to make the story better, I need to remove the incest from the story, what little there is... I can do that. Beyond that....? What would you like to see?
quote: Eh, too much work with not enough pay off. Enjoyed the non-sex, post-TF reaction section the most. I do like MWE's writing style though. Even when it goes into those...weird places, it's part of his M.O. /quote
"Too much work, not enough pay off..." Forgive me, I've had a long day at work, and soon I have to start looking for a new job so my brain's a bit fried, but... What does that mean? Could you explain what you're looking for to me? And... "weird places"... I need to know what you think my M.O. is.
I'd like to learn what you all feel needs improving with my writing style. Come on people, I NEED FEEDBACK! Tell me what's right, tell me what's wrong, just COMUNICATE!
Let the booze flow, let the lyrics glide from hand to keyboard, let the thoughts and the music loose! Now type, type like my stories depend upon it!