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Feedback...feedback...Well I liked the story quite a bit except for the transformation of her mother/incest stuff at the end. The transformation was well done and the rape/ownership part of the story is fine since that is the whole point of the story. I thought it was quite well written although the beginning of the story did seem to drag on for a little bit too long. The part with the cow slave at the end seemed sort of tacked on, and I feel a little bit more time could have been given to the story behind the corporation transforming all these people. Other then those few qualms though I thought it was a great story. See I provided feedback...Whee! :P.
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