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Great story! It does seem a little odd with "If Amy were awake I am sure she would be quite embarrassed by this slow stripping in public". I would prefer "If Amy were awake it is sure she would be quite embarrassed by this slow stripping in public" or "If Amy were awake she would for sure be quite embarrassed by this slow stripping in public". The growth speed and description was well done. Thanks for posting.
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