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Originally Posted by Ninja In The Night
Surprisingly good. Most slow-giantess stories are a bore or just horribly written, but yours is a refreshing drink in a desert. I especially liked on using the proper length, you gave a bit of character development, something that is commonly lacking.
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I did leave out little things like their job and their exact age. I felt that it would be better for the readers to come up with that in their mind so that they can mold the character a little bit for themselves and picture how they want to picture them in the story.
Thanks for the comment ^^
Beetlebomb