[Lurker#12763412]

The new cheesy name for my story will be......

Orange Smoothie

I did a re-write of it and corrected some mistakes. Im going to post it as a txt attachment.

This just popped into my head one day.. and I finally decided to post it somewhere. If this kind of thing is frowned upon, I will delete it. If you want me to continue or any errors that need fixing, please tell me. This is the first story that I have ever "written"!!

The X.1 chapters will be the re-writes of the original 2 chapters, and then im planning on making another chapter.