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Unread 03-15-2008   #4
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Re: 2 $200 contests!!

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Originally Posted by Soatome101 View Post
Well this is sad. I didnt recieve a single peice of Artwork or a Story... sighs. I even broadened the contest range and everything and made it something everyone could have a chance at. What did I do wrong?
I had the same result for one of my contests, so don't think it is just you.

I did start writing something, lost it started again forgot about it. One thing may have been your deadline was to long, so people put it on the back burner and then forget about it.

I had done a story picking up at the air temple, the previous air bender avatar spirit helping Aang find a scroll on how to to create elementals when I lost that I started on the process portion.
Anyway here is what I could find, it is really only a draft and IMO not very good.



Toph transformation
A cabinet of rock projected up from the floor of the air temple encasing Toph. Toph had always had a special connection to the elements of the earth. In fact she had always considered herself part of the earth, and the people of the Earth Kingdom knew that they returned to the earth ?dust to dust?. Toph had always taken great comfort in that.

She felt her body breaking down in to its elemental building blocks, Water separated into hydrogen and oxygen dispersing into the air. She was reduced to a pile of dust.

But she was still aware, she willed herself into the form she had held just moments before. A swirl of dust and metal particulates whipped around in a frenzy. Bonding together into a form that was recognizable as Toph.

And yet it she was no longer flesh and blood. Her skin turned black as skin turned to carbon. Her body had purge any non-earth components. Metals such as Iron, Copper, and Zinc grew in greater proportions filling the void. Toph was one of the few earth benders who could also bend metal. She found that with focus she could control where the metals came to rest in her body, She could have fists of iron if she wanted or copper skin.

Katara?s transformation

Katara had learned from the blood bender the control she could have over the human body though the high percentage of water every cell in the body contained it.

Aang?s transformation of her purified the water, removing the impurities. Beads of water appeared on her flesh. She felt body fluids surging. Muscle, flesh and bone disappeared leaving only water.

She was transfixed by the transformation. Her clothing was saturated. She let the soaked apparel slip through her body and fall to the ground as they were of little use to her in their current state or hers.

Katara stood there naked and wet. Her watery body holding the form she knew as her own. She has total control over her body now. She could adjust its proportions with but a simple thought. She could also change from liquid to solid or gas at a whim. Soon she discovered that she could with a degree of effort, she could be in all three.

Ice crystals began to form around areas of her body that she wished to conceal from the boys.
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