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Unread 03-15-2008   #75
Snowglare
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Re: BE Story Club Presents: Spells R Us #4

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Originally Posted by Kaosu Reido View Post
Let me go into a little more detail for those who think "Eh":

The girl randomly has been sent to prison because the magic boob powers have retroactively removed her driver's license (also, her entire family is the size of houses; fat-wise. I just don't like that). Now it's assumed that she's stolen the car and was driving illegally.

The cops ignore everything she says, and then, I'm completely serious here, they take her down to the cells. One cop makes an excuse that "lolz the other cells are full you go in here", and proceeds to throw her in with some people who already look like seasoned cons. You know, 'cause the poor pretty girl with the giant boobs who may or may not be driving without a license should be thrown in there.

A comment is actually made by the cop that the felons should keep their hands off her. He then walks away, presumably into a sound proof booth a mile away due to what happens next, as opposed to sitting at a nearby desk to guard the potentially violent felons.

What happens next, by the way, is that they take all of two seconds to tear her clothes off, rape her, etc, etc. Cops hear none of this, by the way. Apparently it's the quietest rape ever, plus no cop ever thinks of doing a stroll by to make sure no one's hurt the obvious rape-bait.

Yeah. I should mention, this goes on for two hours, according to the comic, and the magic apparently makes her go "Yay! Rape!" until the end.

This is to say nothing about the demeaning tone the entire town has towards her, including random members of the public hanging around the hospital to see her, and then one guy ACTUALLY SAYING SHE DESERVES TO ROT IN PRISON DUE TO HER BREAST SIZE.

What.


I think it's important to note that this one comic is not the entire BESC, that there are other reasons to subscribe or not, but holy shit dude. Holy shit.

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Originally Posted by dragon6860 View Post
Kaosu, I agree. They keep on saying, "It's a Spells-R-Us story." in response, but come on...I only think I read a one or two SrU storys, but i seem to remember a lot of them being male-female TF. I could be wrong of course, it's been a while. But was rape a large part of the stories?
I've read quite a few SRU stories, and although they tended towards the "wish goes horribly wrong" plot, they weren't a consistent squickfest. I don't think "mind controlled slut" stories are inherently bad, but you have to spin it a certain way. It's all too easy for it to become extremely uncomfortable to read, which seems to be the case here. It's one thing to use MC to give a bitch her comeuppance, or to lower inhibitions/increase confidence. That can still get creepy, but it doesn't have to, in my opinion. Bill Pratt and Fret Pearson do a good job of toeing the line between good and bad MC. Sometimes they tip over to the wrong side, but their stories are more about sexy fun than cruel punishment.

There's no fun in seeing a nice, if misguided, girl have her life completely ruined by an ill-advised wish. That's about as sexy as the scene in Leprechaun 3 where the woman who wishes for bigger breasts blows up (inflates) and then blows up (explodes), or the end of the otherwise hawt Faust BE scene, where the woman melts into goo. It's so... wtf? Why can't there just be sexiness, you know? Everyone gets horny and fucks. That's a good story, pornwise.
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