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catfish27 · 03-15-2008

Heck, I've been feeling a little bit squicky about "Dream Girl" since the scene involving the school administrator in Part 2 -- but I managed to choke down the bile because I do enjoy a certain amount of MC, not to mention changes to reality, in my erotic entertainment.

To me, it doesn't really have the tone of a "canon" Spells 'R' Us story. It's kind of playing out like a "Twilight Zone" episode. At this point, we're in the commercial break between Act II and Act III, and it's hard to tell whether Liz is going to wake up from a dream to find out that she's actually been transformed into a small-breasted prude, or whether Carlos is going to show up and decide he doesn't like Ana and wish her into the cornfield, or what.

That's why I hope the "finish 'Dream Girl'" contest does come to fruition -- I think it'll temper the ugliness in Part 4 quite a bit if there's a Part 5 that takes the story in a more, shall we say, happy direction (followed by a Part 6, Part 7, however long is necessary). Then we'll have a closing narration by Rod Serling, and then it'll be time to turn off the TV and go to bed.

03-15-2008	#78
catfish27 Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 442	Re: BE Story Club Presents: Spells R Us #4 Heck, I've been feeling a little bit squicky about "Dream Girl" since the scene involving the school administrator in Part 2 -- but I managed to choke down the bile because I do enjoy a certain amount of MC, not to mention changes to reality, in my erotic entertainment. To me, it doesn't really have the tone of a "canon" Spells 'R' Us story. It's kind of playing out like a "Twilight Zone" episode. At this point, we're in the commercial break between Act II and Act III, and it's hard to tell whether Liz is going to wake up from a dream to find out that she's actually been transformed into a small-breasted prude, or whether Carlos is going to show up and decide he doesn't like Ana and wish her into the cornfield, or what. That's why I hope the "finish 'Dream Girl'" contest does come to fruition -- I think it'll temper the ugliness in Part 4 quite a bit if there's a Part 5 that takes the story in a more, shall we say, happy direction (followed by a Part 6, Part 7, however long is necessary). Then we'll have a closing narration by Rod Serling, and then it'll be time to turn off the TV and go to bed.