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Unread 05-08-2008   #7
LilBigFox
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Re: Tracy's Trouble (Story)

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Originally Posted by scidram View Post
Absolutely outstanding!

The entire premise of a woman all alone, cut off from civilization, learning she is shrinking with no idea why, how or if it will stop is so fresh. There is so much room for drama and tension.

And as an added layer, there is the reaction of Dr. Marissa, reading this journal. Will she think the island caused the shrinking? Will she also start shrinking? Will she try to find the journal's writer? Or will she leave the island, before she's realized she's shrinking too? What happens then?

SO MANY POSSIBILITIES! Please write more!
I'll second that. More, please. Slow shrinking is so rare.
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