to me the overall art was great sure it would have been better to spread the change over souple more panels but otherwise its was good. the artwork itself was up there with the KIng Mako himself.
i wish i could find an artist to do the story i wrote a long time ago.
Billy's 21st birthday party it was the first story i wrote. its on
http://www.nifty.org under transgend/magic / sci -fi / date july 27,1999
the story itself is good but the spelling and grammar needed work spelling because i didnt use spell check the first time. story is tf and tg along with possession. check it out.