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Originally Posted by Huzzus
Getting better but seemed to go by fast. A little more descriptive always helps  Add a little flair and make it sound sexy. Describe how her breasts bounced as she ran, what she was thinking and set the mood. This includes the surroundings too.
It's a good story but a little positive advise never hurts. Plus Midna bouncing boobs alone is a smile on my face.
Oh and glad to hear from ya again. |
Thanks
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Yes, I tried to slow it at points ( as you might've seen a few times ), but I had no idea exactly where without slowing the whole thing down.
I know what you mean, but there's a certain border I do not want to cross. I never make my art too sexual. However, bouncing doesn't cross the border... but how do I make that better?
Thanks for your advice.