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Unread 05-27-2008   #119
Huzzus
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Re: Midna BE Story

If you want to be more descriptive in things not crossing the boarder like breasts jiggles? Try

"As Midna was running through the great halls of the Twilight palace, her massive breasts swayed and bobbed in her cloak. Each stepped sent waves across each breast. Bouncing closer and closer to her face and the sheer weight made it harder for Midna to run. "This is so wrong." Midna thought as she tried to stabilize her wild bouncing breasts, close to the point of pouring out of her skin tight top."

I'm not a story person *I can't even pass a English class* so I'm not the best person to ask but try something like I did but better ^^;
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