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Unread 06-05-2008   #9
spidey0527
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Re: Midna BE Story

It's great to see the story continuing. I wish I was more of a writer so that I could give you useful tips. The only thing that really comes to mind is to make the writing more detailed. But I also like your writing as it is. Keep up the good work.
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