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Good stuff, really like the artwork.
I remember that contest on Lightfoot's sight, and I remember the only real problem I had with your storyline was that it was almost essentially the plot for Ranma 1/2. But now that you've tweaked the characters and situations around, it does work better.
Except for the fact that Grape is still almost a carbon copy of Shampoo. You've changed her a lot from where she started at, but (and this is my stupid opinion and you don't have to listen to me, I can't even draw so who am I to talk) I would like to see her get away from that in some way.
*shrugs* Or maybe I don't know what I'm talking about, and should just shut-up and enjoy the excellent artwork.
Yeah I like that idea.
Sean
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