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BustArtist · 07-12-2008

Nice story, dsojourn! Nice way to start it, too -- kind of like saying, "This is part of a much bigger picture, but we're gonna' start HERE..." and then let the reader piece it together later. Nice!

My only disappointment was the last page. Not that anything was "wrong" or "bad". Actually, because it was so enjoyable up to the end, I only wished there was room to fit a few extra steps between the "before" and "after" of the last part. Ah well. No biggie.

Can't wait to the next installment!

07-12-2008	#6
BustArtist Frequent Poster Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: New York Posts: 463	Re: BE Story Club: Stranger Than Fiction Nice story, dsojourn! Nice way to start it, too -- kind of like saying, "This is part of a much bigger picture, but we're gonna' start HERE..." and then let the reader piece it together later. Nice! My only disappointment was the last page. Not that anything was "wrong" or "bad". Actually, because it was so enjoyable up to the end, I only wished there was room to fit a few extra steps between the "before" and "after" of the last part. Ah well. No biggie. Can't wait to the next installment!