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an old story of mine
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Vengeance1701
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Re: an old story of mine
Not too bad, Jake.... I thought the writing was done fairly well.
Not too thrilled about the multiple breasts (which was about the only down side for me).
Everything else was done very satisfactorily
And your BE stuff is good on the ADDVenture.
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