I don't know, the narration/dialog feels rather... forced and awkward, like this excerpt
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Originally Posted by theshoelace
‘‘ Ilia, are you here?’’, she heard her father’s voice ask. ‘‘ Yes, I am.’’, she answered. ‘‘ OK. I’m going to bed now, so good night.’’, he said. ‘‘ Okay, good night.’’,
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It just doesn't... flow right.
And the character seem to lack their personality, Midna's supposed to be a snarky little bugger, just as one example. (though Illia really didn't have much of one to recall from twilight Princess.
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