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blackjack021 · 08-21-2008

It's short, but it's very good! The only thing I'd like to see is you saying the final size she ends up at the end, but it's also nice if it's left up to the reader's imagination. I'd definitely upload it to OFB, you have a real winner here.

08-21-2008	#8
blackjack021 The Claw! Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 67	Re: Short story BE It's short, but it's very good! The only thing I'd like to see is you saying the final size she ends up at the end, but it's also nice if it's left up to the reader's imagination. I'd definitely upload it to OFB, you have a real winner here.