Re: The Fountain of Growth
You're probably right about that. It's not exactly a title that grabs you (outside of using the word "growth" I suppose), and it's really something I just threw together very quickly. How about "Kiseki and Maki's Big Surprise", or something involving water? PM me ideas if you have any.
I wasn't expecting so much positive feedback, by the way. Thanks to all those who have left comments!
Also, chapter 5 is up now on writing.com, for those curious (see the second link in my signature to proceed to it).
Last edited by Silver Spoon; 09-03-2008 at 07:23 AM.
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