Re: New TF Story
I have really been enjoying your story. I especially like how your try to avoid mental conversions. I agree with you that it is worse than rape in some ways. I personally would rather have my arms and legs chopped off rather than have my mind tampered with. I am wondering though, The Flesh seems to have the ability to reason and has some base emotions such as fear, do you plan on making The Flesh a dynamic character with the possibility to get complex emotions such as jealousy, or leave it as a static character only wanting more food and begrudgingly following the will of The Mind?
As for the recent turn of events concerning the nurse, I don't see her really going anywhere, as she most likely will always be stuck inside the apartment unless her mind is change even more. But considering how you have worked with the characters so far I assume that you have a plan for her.
I also would like to ask, have you addressed or plan too address what happens when the entire food supply of a planet is consumed by The Flesh? Would it become self sustaining, turn cannibalistic or just escape the planet leaving it an empty husk barren of life bar microorganisms?
Keep Up the good work.
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