Re: New TF Story
I just finished reading the story so far, and am bloody impressed. This is really good stuff. I can't wait to see what happens to the CDC representative.
I did notice a few typos, though- while they aren't bad enough to actually ruin it, they do detract slightly from the flow of the story.
Also, Hmmm, I'm liking the pictures. They really capture the feeling of it.
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